Raining heavily

A poem – Cry

It’s been raining heavily every single day & night
I’m breathing ashes, the air is exploding flaming dynamite
The universe seems pitch dark, there’s no sign of intense light
I’m drowning in deep sorrow, pain is what I feel & write

I’m sitting still in shock, surrounded by speechless noise
My body is covered in layers but my state is frozen to cubicle ice
My heart is beating with crazy screams of my saddened voice
I don’t know what else to do when all I do is to simply cry

My big brown eyes were once shining with beautiful green crystals so divine
Now they’re soaked in sparkling tears, red eyes are all left behind
I dreamt, I could fly high with my broken wings in beautiful blue skies
But my feet are sinking slowly on heavy ground every moment that passes by

I’m trying hard to accept & breathe without the painful sighs of life
The knife is stuck in the I & it won’t let me live, it won’t let me die
So I close my eyes to sense the deep emotions that are suffocating my mind
But then I cry even more coz it feels as if I’m witnessing my own demise

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42 thoughts on “A poem – Cry

  1. Quite lovely ❤️
    Sometimes we express all we have in these pain infused glimpses. One thing I’ve learned is it’s either a calming for my mind and heart or someone else’s.
    Wonderful job

  2. Eventually the rains subside, the grey parts and light shines. It is the “I” that allows the tears to lessen what ails the mind and heart. Hugs my friend 🙏🏼💙

  3. Den enorme smerte udtrykkes smerteligt her. Åh kære Navin, jeg ønsker at du snart kan komme ud af dette og lade de brudte stykker blive ordnet. Meget kærlighed til dig ❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Ps: Used GT, as am not a pro as you know. 😄😄

    1. Tusind tak for din søde ord kære P….Kærlig hilsen ❤️✨….
      PS: I was also thinking now you’re writing crazy long sentences in a go….I’m glad you’re trying 😊✨

  4. This so heartbreaking and beautiful. Your metaphors are just absolutely stunning🖤

    “I’m breathing ashes, the air is exploding flaming dynamite.” This is frighteningly expressive.

    And the second stanza was absolutely spectacular!

    Please take care dear friend❤🙏

    1. Thank you very much for your kind & heartfelt words, dearest Keza….rain is stopping gradually….weather would change….thanks for your lovely support ✨❤️🙏

  5. I’m speechless at both your poem and execution of emotions and feelings expressed so vividly and powerful. Really incredibly delivered Dearest Navin and I trust that no matter how deep you sink you will fly to those beautiful blue skies with your gorgeous brown eyes. Sending you a big hug and lots of love through the ethers. 💖❤️🌷🤗🤗🌈🌈🌈🌈

    1. Thank you very much for your kind & heartfelt words….I’m humbled beyond words….much love, dearest Cindy 🙏❤️✨

      1. You are soooo welcome, it was an honor to share with you! That makes my heart happy and I hope you let it sink in and know how loved you are. Thanks for the love as I start my morning! love and hugs back! ❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🌷🌷

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