I sleep in my shed with no sheet on my shape to reveal myself in this naked dream
I could sense your delicate presence and your gentle touch on my rough & wounded skin
The wet taste of tenderness was breathless when your reminiscence kissed my thirsty lips
The beauty & the beast I could reel with the tip of my screams in one single & effortless sync
These days my heart is burning in fire & dark memories, so I pen my art with sighs & I drop the beat
Longing to belong & to be can stream the rivery of my inner scene into the whispers of my lonely tears
The thing is that I can see the serene smile instantly & sea the shine of your waterfall with crystals green
The pink thread & pinpricks did stitch mess & paint sick but the fact remains it’s still you that I purely miss
It’s you I mirror & it’s you I loved with pure intention but today only your reflection is left in the song – it’s you
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31 thoughts on “Dream”
Wow my dear Navin, this is simply stunning. I LOVE the unique style, it’s so captivating and deep. My favorite parts would have to be the “skin” stanza and the ending, truly took my breath way. There is such a soothing flow to this piece…I’ve read it several times and it connects with my heart more and more. Amazing work, my friend. This piece is something special 💫🙌🏻🖤
Oh my, you’re words are always so beautiful, captivating & heartfelt that I end up sitting in Awe, dear Ace….my gratitude to you 🙏 🖤
A beautiful song of healing, heartbreak and memory, very deep heartfelt emotions wonderfully written.
Thank you dear Blue 🙏💙…what can I say…I’m riding the wave 🖤
You’re welcome. 😊💙💫
Amazing flowic for sure….the passion to feel in those words is a blessing….no more hurt….not much lower do some of us need to be unearthed……thank you for sharing your art & ebb to flow
Thank you very much my flowic friend K✨🙏
I’m glad you liked them…thank you
This is just amazing…. I love how you choose the small words before writing deep about it. My favourite would be Dream and Tears! The whole in itself is an amazing write ❤️❤️ Thank you Navin for sharing this. Have a great day ahead 🤝
I’m delighted to know you liked my poetry….thank you very much for your heartfelt words & thank you for your lovely support 🙏✨❤️
This poem left me breathless. Bravo!
I’m delighted to read….Thank you Ishita!
Beautiful, dearest Navin. The emotions you create, express, and deliver in this lovely poem are raw, powerful, and full of the human experience. And, this here, “The pink thread & pinpricks did stitch mess & paint sick but the fact remains it’s still you that I purely miss” is genius. ❤️✨
My gratitude for your heartfelt words, dearest Jeff….it’s an honour to read your words….Much love ❤️ ✨ 🙏
You’re most welcome, my dear friend. Sending much love. ❤🙏🤗
Beautiful, Navin… I love the break of lines where there is just a single word, almost sounds like a heartbeat to me… and the last line is gorgeous! Very lovely and portrays the feeling of remembrance of a beautiful love. <3
You got it right, Linda….that’s how I saw this poem…that’s y the break of lines….thank you very much for liking my lines 🙏🖤
Love them. It’s very thoughtful, the way you structure your poems (i.e. reading them out loud, adding rhetoric emphasis to certain aspects, always referencing the color green)… very cool! 🙂
Each words defined with emotions and feelings beautifully. The arrangement and syncing is fantastic.
Thank you very much Kritika….I’m glad you liked my poem 🙏✨
Always my pleasure to read your work. 🙂
oh my goodness gracious… this is GORGEOUS. I just love your poetry Navin. You are such a beautiful soul.
Thank you very much for such a gorgeous-heartfelt comment of yours, Tara ✨
I read it in IG and love it even more here. So much pain and longing in this.. It gives me goosebumps. I could read them again and again, Navin. Stay blessed always❤️❤️🙏💫
Oh wow, thank you very much for your beautiful words….they touched my heart right away….you’re always there for me with your support….I appreciate it very much 🙏 🖤💫
I love the way you’ve laid this out. It’s very beautiful in look and cadence
I love your beautiful comment….I’m delighted that you liked my poem, dear EC….it means a lot to me ✨ ❤️