Dream navinspoetry


I sleep in my shed with no sheet on my shape to reveal myself in this naked dream
I could sense your delicate presence and your gentle touch on my rough & wounded skin
The wet taste of tenderness was breathless when your reminiscence kissed my thirsty lips
The beauty & the beast I could reel with the tip of my screams in one single & effortless sync
These days my heart is burning in fire & dark memories, so I pen my art with sighs & I drop the beat
Longing to belong & to be can stream the rivery of my inner scene into the whispers of my lonely tears
The thing is that I can see the serene smile instantly & sea the shine of your waterfall with crystals green
The pink thread & pinpricks did stitch mess & paint sick but the fact remains it’s still you that I purely miss
It’s you I mirror & it’s you I loved with pure intention but today only your reflection is left in the song – it’s you

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31 thoughts on “Dream

  1. Wow my dear Navin, this is simply stunning. I LOVE the unique style, it’s so captivating and deep. My favorite parts would have to be the “skin” stanza and the ending, truly took my breath way. There is such a soothing flow to this piece…I’ve read it several times and it connects with my heart more and more. Amazing work, my friend. This piece is something special 💫🙌🏻🖤

    1. Oh my, you’re words are always so beautiful, captivating & heartfelt that I end up sitting in Awe, dear Ace….my gratitude to you 🙏 🖤

  2. A beautiful song of healing, heartbreak and memory, very deep heartfelt emotions wonderfully written.

  3. Amazing flowic for sure….the passion to feel in those words is a blessing….no more hurt….not much lower do some of us need to be unearthed……thank you for sharing your art & ebb to flow

  4. This is just amazing…. I love how you choose the small words before writing deep about it. My favourite would be Dream and Tears! The whole in itself is an amazing write ❤️❤️ Thank you Navin for sharing this. Have a great day ahead 🤝

    1. I’m delighted to know you liked my poetry….thank you very much for your heartfelt words & thank you for your lovely support 🙏✨❤️

  5. Beautiful, dearest Navin. The emotions you create, express, and deliver in this lovely poem are raw, powerful, and full of the human experience. And, this here, “The pink thread & pinpricks did stitch mess & paint sick but the fact remains it’s still you that I purely miss” is genius. ❤️✨

    1. My gratitude for your heartfelt words, dearest Jeff….it’s an honour to read your words….Much love ❤️ ✨ 🙏

  6. Beautiful, Navin… I love the break of lines where there is just a single word, almost sounds like a heartbeat to me… and the last line is gorgeous! Very lovely and portrays the feeling of remembrance of a beautiful love. <3

    1. You got it right, Linda….that’s how I saw this poem…that’s y the break of lines….thank you very much for liking my lines 🙏🖤

      1. Love them. It’s very thoughtful, the way you structure your poems (i.e. reading them out loud, adding rhetoric emphasis to certain aspects, always referencing the color green)… very cool! 🙂

  7. I read it in IG and love it even more here. So much pain and longing in this.. It gives me goosebumps. I could read them again and again, Navin. Stay blessed always❤️❤️🙏💫

    1. Oh wow, thank you very much for your beautiful words….they touched my heart right away….you’re always there for me with your support….I appreciate it very much 🙏 🖤💫

    1. I love your beautiful comment….I’m delighted that you liked my poem, dear EC….it means a lot to me ✨ ❤️

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