I’m ready to play this crazy game
Firing shots at my mindless brain
Killing the dead spots from point-blank range
Freaking my beast out & the senseless rage
It’s time to transform the savage to a sage
It’s time to free my soul from this solid cage
I’m taking the steps to change my deeper state
I’m dissolving the imbalance & my wavy pain
These bullets was pointing at my shaky phase
It’s to awaken my senses, not to kill me dead
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Amazing piece, Navin. Loved it.❤️
Thank you very much for reading & liking my lines, Grace 🙏 ❤️ ✨
A deeply moving piece….. It’s time to transform the savage to a sage
It’s time to free my soul from this solid cage
I’m taking the steps to change my deeper state, these lines are wonderful, Navin. 😊💙🙏🏼💫
Thank you, Blue for your wonderful words 🙏💫💙✨
Always my pleasure. 😊🙏🏼💙💫
This poem is full of energy and intention channeled towards inner transformation, how powerful! 🔥
That’s quite true….channeled towards inner transformation….thank you very much, dear Linda 💫
You are welcome, Navin! 💫💫💫💫💫💫💫
Wow Navin, this is so powerful and deeply alive! I could feel the strength in each of your words. There’s a certain freedom in the flow of this piece and it truly resonates with my soul. Beautifully done, my friend. Your writing is always so deeply divine and alive with magic, emotion and raw authenticity. Keep on shining 🤗🖤💫
Oh wow, it resonates with your soul….I’m “souled”….that’s quite true, there’s a certain freedom….that’s how I was feeling when I wrote these lines….thank you very much for your heartfelt words, dear Ace….much love your way 🖤💫🤍🤗
There really are so many great lines in this piece Navin “savage to a sage” I love it.
I’m delighted to read that you liked my lines, Bree….thank you so very much 💫
Great piece! Very powerful and deep.
I’m glad you liked it….Thank you very much, Aashi!
woww ..! det er virkelig fantastisk ..! så stærke ord, du har brugt her Navin ..! og også rimet var fantastisk ..! Bliv ved med at skinne min ven ..! hav en smuk dag..!😊
Tusind tak Filarance, min danske ven….jeg er glad for at læse at du godt kunne lide mit digt….bliv ved med at skrive på dansk….ha’ en vidunderlig aften! 😊💫
Wow! Du er meget velkommen, min danske ven.. det er min fornøjelse..! Selvfølgelig vil jeg det..! Have en smuk after til dig også!!😊✨
Tak og i lige måde, Filarance 💫😊
Min fornøjelse Navin ..! hvis du er fri til at besøge min blog ..!😊
Det skal jeg nok gøre med det samme…jeg er ikke så meget på WP i de her dage…derfor tager det nogen gang længere tid…..
Å ok min ven!! Have en vidunderling aften!!😊
Such depth and power in your conviction of desire Navin. Wonderful work. 💖
Thank you very much for liking my writing, dear Cindy 🙏❤️✨
it is my pleasure Navin💖
Even more powerful the second read through. Lovely piece, dear Navin. ✨❤️
Dear Jeff, thank you very much for your kindness n heartfelt words….I’m humbled 🙏❤️💫
You’re most welcome, dear Navin. Is my complete pleasure to read and listen to you lovely work, my friend. ❤️🙏✨
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Powerful and moving!
Thanks Isha!
Poignant 🙏
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