A poem – Firing Shots

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I’m ready to play this crazy game
Firing shots at my mindless brain
Killing the dead spots from point-blank range
Freaking my beast out & the senseless rage
It’s time to transform the savage to a sage
It’s time to free my soul from this solid cage
I’m taking the steps to change my deeper state
I’m dissolving the imbalance & my wavy pain
These bullets was pointing at my shaky phase
It’s to awaken my senses, not to kill me dead

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30 thoughts on “A poem – Firing Shots”

  1. A deeply moving piece….. It’s time to transform the savage to a sage
    It’s time to free my soul from this solid cage
    I’m taking the steps to change my deeper state, these lines are wonderful, Navin. 😊💙🙏🏼💫

  2. Wow Navin, this is so powerful and deeply alive! I could feel the strength in each of your words. There’s a certain freedom in the flow of this piece and it truly resonates with my soul. Beautifully done, my friend. Your writing is always so deeply divine and alive with magic, emotion and raw authenticity. Keep on shining 🤗🖤💫

    1. Oh wow, it resonates with your soul….I’m “souled”….that’s quite true, there’s a certain freedom….that’s how I was feeling when I wrote these lines….thank you very much for your heartfelt words, dear Ace….much love your way 🖤💫🤍🤗

  3. woww ..! det er virkelig fantastisk ..! så stærke ord, du har brugt her Navin ..! og også rimet var fantastisk ..! Bliv ved med at skinne min ven ..! hav en smuk dag..!😊

    1. Tusind tak Filarance, min danske ven….jeg er glad for at læse at du godt kunne lide mit digt….bliv ved med at skrive på dansk….ha’ en vidunderlig aften! 😊💫

      1. Wow! Du er meget velkommen, min danske ven.. det er min fornøjelse..! Selvfølgelig vil jeg det..! Have en smuk after til dig også!!😊✨

            1. Det skal jeg nok gøre med det samme…jeg er ikke så meget på WP i de her dage…derfor tager det nogen gang længere tid…..

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