A poem – My Words

It’s getting late in this very cold night
So I’m trying to close my tired eyes
The problem is that they aren’t at all dry
My thoughts are galloping but I can’t even ride
My fingers are frozen, so I’m struggling to write
But here I am still awake to simply freestyle

I’m just expressing how a train wreck feels like
I could be brain dead but I’m very alive
Honesty is what I breathe & not the lies
The highs & the lows of this crazy life
Everything seems unreal in pure realtime
My walls were once painted with pure real joy

I won’t give up easily coz I love you so high
Until I hear one last time, it’s all over & goodbye
Coz I can still sense the pure energy deep inside
I know you love me, it’s just not in my mind
The beautiful crystals so sacred & divine
The melodious voice so sweet & so fine

My words are forming this formless fire
My heart is braking, it used to freely fly
I guess, I wasn’t the type even though I did say & type
I’m lost & shaking, there’s no inner light
I’m blue & shrinking but I’ll always see your shine
I feel like bagging myself to forever hide

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47 thoughts on “A poem – My Words

  1. Thoughts that run through the mind, the second verse speaks from the heart. Very emotionally expressive poem. 💙💫🙏🏼

  2. Really beautiful and emotion poem. You have expressed yourself so deeply well. Each word and each verse and each line cuts our heart’s and souls. We feel your pain, it’s as if we are right there with you. Love is hard, love is painful, love hurts and it takes work. Amazing work ❤️😊🌹

    1. Oh wow….thank you very much for your beautiful words & support….I very much appreciate it….you’re always there to support….love is beautiful, even though it sometime pains….my gratitude ❤️😊✨

  3. Navin I love the way you express yourself. You are a very vivid writer one can feel along beside you. This is very touching.

    “Honesty is what I breathe & not the lies
    The highs & the lows of this crazy life”

    I love the honesty in your words my friend. Sending you much love and blessings. 💕❤️🤗 Joni

    1. Thank you very much for your kind words, Joni…I’m glad you think I’m a vivid writer….much appreciated….have a peaceful day ✨😊🙏

  4. Thank you for sharing this poem, Navin. That last line hits deep. There have been times in my life when I wanted to not exist, not to die, but simply cease to be, to disappear from this physical existence.

    You write with such passion the words and emotion almost leap off the page. Thank you. ♥

    1. Thank you very much for your heartfelt words, dear Hamish….they mean a lot to me….I’m “glad” you could connect with my poem….the only scheme or prompt I follow….is heart….I know you don’t feel anymore to disappear….thank you once again kind hearted soul 🙏✨❤️

  5. Wow Navin. Truly you are a born writer. So smoothly you wrote this. Your passion is raw and very unique. Clearly visible in your writing. Keep up the good work. More power to you my friend. Keep blogging

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