27 thoughts on “A teardrop from my upcoming poem”

  1. Navin I feel your anguish in your lines. You express yourself beautifully. For some it is difficult to read about sadness that others suffer with because they care about you. I too don’t like knowing you feel sadness but it is a strong emotion that exist. I am also overcome with sadness at times. I truly look forward to reading the rest of your poem. I am sending you love and light my kind friend. πŸ€—β€οΈπŸ˜˜Joni

    1. Thank you very much for your kind & heartfelt words….yeah, it could be difficult to read abt sadness….but if it’s the current moment of one’s life….then it is what it is….all the moments have place…..joy, happiness, pain, sadness….that’s what I’m expressing….much love, Joni βœ¨πŸ™β€οΈ

  2. In one line you capture so much emotion. You draw in the reader to want more, and also to stand beside you in whatever battles you happened to be facing, because of how relatable they are.

    As much peace as I can muster to you, my friend. ❀

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