I don’t know what I’m writing while I’m riding on these high & heavy waves coz it feels as if I’m the riot dressed as the dark knight that’s dicing the dark night into the liquid black diamonds to create this crazy environment that appears quite obnoxious as it starts to simply sparkle by the quiet flow of several mercury droplets that are dripping in line on quite uneven ground & merging together to form the contrasting soundless choir
I then choose to close my red eyes to empty this glass filled with edgy violence so I can make some space & listen to the storm of frozen silence that I breathe when I sit on the pilot seat in my once bled brainless but sharp carbon steel mind to take this very long turbulent flight to the figure eight shaped infinite to reach this place somewhere in between darkness & daylight where I start to flip the tinted & blurred slides under the flickering but intense light on this unknown street to reveal this crowded scene of real life
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14 thoughts on “Brainless”
A vivid scenario Navin … sounds like you need to borrow my “Itmims” spacecraft to quietly observe the universe from distant vantage point …
*Itmims” .. Ivor’s Time Machine In Micro Space”
Sounds great – Itmims
Thank you for reading my lines, Ivor ✨
Wowser Navin:) That’s some potent free-falling mind flow that is filled with lines and phrases that are so you…and therefore makes this poem shine..liked those diced diamonds from the night sky:)
“I’m the riot dressed as the dark knight”..Love this..so vivid and so you:)
“to empty this glass filled with edgy violence “..
Oh yes you always find the words
“my once bled brainless but sharp carbon steel mind”
what an amazing description full of reality and the whole potrait
Always in awe of your unique poetry Naveen..this is no exception and I
Congratulate you for sharing it with us…with the world. Bravo..Just fantastic writing…but no surprise there…it’s your trademark!🌹
I’m deeply touched by reading your wonderful words…you don’t just read the poem…you sense it…and then you add your reflection…that’s the beauty…thank you very much, Karima ✨💖
I completely agree with Karima 👆 💜
Thank you very much, Bree…that’s kind of you 💜
Powerful, vivid and guttural Navin. \”close my red eyes to empty this glass filled with edgy violence so I can make some space & listen to the storm of frozen silence that I breathe when I sit on the pilot seat in my once bled brainless but sharp carbon steel mind”.
Great visual!! 💗
I’m glad that you liked my writing…thank you very much, Cindy ✨❤
you’re so welcome Navin!! ❣️
you’re so welcome Pooja❣️
Wow, I’ve got a new name 😎
hahahahahah Well at least she’s a dream like you and we could both borrow a few of her years. And I for one brain cells. Sorry Navin! 😱🤣🥰
Haha, absolutely…no worries at all…you don’t need to say sorry…it’s just funny ✨❤️💫😂
Glad you’re laughing my dear funny man Navin.. laughing with you!! 🤣💞