Fluid Lines

Fluid Lines navinspoetry

The empty space that purely shines
The clouds vaporize the deeper sky
The heart is Universe’s loving child
The beats are airing the blazing fire

No game to play by rolling the dice
No armour-sword to protect & slice
No story to hold coz there’s no point
No blame or guilt can pain my I

The now is glowing the simple signs
Truth & raw are my intense lights
Black & white is my intuitive choice
The falls are to weather the inside

The golden symbol I’ve just put aside
The white ring I then carefully eye
The nothingness I wear is dragon size
The path dissolves this very time

The silence in my breathing windpipe
The heat of this frozen thick ice
The drops form my poetic fluid lines
The flow rivers my transparent rhyme

Dying once again to reset my life
The new state is staging the wise
The freedom I grip is peace on a vice
Accepting my present is truly divine

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60 thoughts on “Fluid Lines”

  1. My dearest Navin, this is simply outstanding! First of all, your hand picture is just mesmerizing and the title totally captivated me! The flow your beautiful words create is absolutely and magically divine. Each of your words soak into my heart and soul, especially the powerful ending! Fabulously done, my dear friend πŸ–€πŸ€—πŸ’«

    1. Oh my….my gratitude to you for your heartfelt words, my dearest Ace….soaking in is what I was doing, coz I read your words the day you wrote….I’m glad you liked my writing & my picture….it’s certainly very special to me….Much love πŸ€—πŸ–€βœ¨πŸ€πŸ’«

  2. The visions you forged in this outstanding stanza are truly captivating Navin…
    “The silence in my breathing windpipe
    The heat of this frozen thick ice
    The drops form my poetic fluid lines
    The flow rivers my transparent rhyme”

    1. Thank you very much for connecting with this stanza, Ivor….it’s the state when I wrote the poem…it’s the state this moment as well πŸ’«

  3. A truly mesmerizing piece, dear Navin. The raw self-awareness of the difficulty of the journey to freedom, balanced with the beauty of this same journey. I adore your verse. Much love. ❀️✨

    1. Thank you very much for your wonderful words, dear Jeff….this means a lot to me….much love ❀️ ✨ πŸ™

  4. Dear Navin, the pain can be felt when reading this. Poignant yet beautiful πŸ’”
    And the end is so true, to accept the present is truly divine. ❀️❀️
    Glad to see you back.. 🀝

    1. Dear Preeths, that’s the very essence of this poem….the end, which in reality is the begining coz there’s no end in the present….thank you very much….I’m glad to be back as well ❀️ ✨ πŸ€— 🀝

  5. Hej Navin .. dejligt at se dig tilbage .. dette digt er hjerteskærende ..! du udtrykte smerten meget godt .. de ord du har brugt her viser smerten .. meget fantastisk gjort min ven .. Hope all is well..! Hope you are doing great..! Have a beautiful day my friend..!😊✨✨

    1. Tak for det Filarance….tak for dine fine ord….det er ogsΓ₯ dejligt at komme tilbage….jeg er glad at du godt kunne lide mine ord….I’m doing exactly I’m supposed to be….thx…have a peaceful & wonderful day, my friend ✨

    1. I’m glad you liked my poem…I’m peeling an onion…well, metaphorically…thank you very much for your lovely words, Cindy ❀️ ✨ πŸ™

  6. Wow! This really is so beautiful. There’s something great and and extraordinary about this. The pain, the optimistic thought really captivated my mind …
    “Dying once again to reset my life”
    “Accepting my present is truly divine”….
    I guess so and somehow this line made my day. It’s truly magical. Keep up your good work.

    1. Oh wow, I’m deeply touched by your heartfelt words….this means a lot to me that you could connect with my lines….thank you very much, Aanchal πŸ™πŸ’«

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