The empty space that purely shines
The clouds vaporize the deeper sky
The heart is Universe’s loving child
The beats are airing the blazing fire
No game to play by rolling the dice
No armour-sword to protect & slice
No story to hold coz there’s no point
No blame or guilt can pain my I
The now is glowing the simple signs
Truth & raw are my intense lights
Black & white is my intuitive choice
The falls are to weather the inside
The golden symbol I’ve just put aside
The white ring I then carefully eye
The nothingness I wear is dragon size
The path dissolves this very time
The silence in my breathing windpipe
The heat of this frozen thick ice
The drops form my poetic fluid lines
The flow rivers my transparent rhyme
Dying once again to reset my life
The new state is staging the wise
The freedom I grip is peace on a vice
Accepting my present is truly divine
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Brilliant verse, Navin.
Thank you very much, Yassy ✨
Welcome, Navin
Amazing!
Thanks Lucy!
My dearest Navin, this is simply outstanding! First of all, your hand picture is just mesmerizing and the title totally captivated me! The flow your beautiful words create is absolutely and magically divine. Each of your words soak into my heart and soul, especially the powerful ending! Fabulously done, my dear friend 🖤🤗💫
Oh my….my gratitude to you for your heartfelt words, my dearest Ace….soaking in is what I was doing, coz I read your words the day you wrote….I’m glad you liked my writing & my picture….it’s certainly very special to me….Much love 🤗🖤✨🤍💫
The visions you forged in this outstanding stanza are truly captivating Navin…
“The silence in my breathing windpipe
The heat of this frozen thick ice
The drops form my poetic fluid lines
The flow rivers my transparent rhyme”
Thank you very much for connecting with this stanza, Ivor….it’s the state when I wrote the poem…it’s the state this moment as well 💫
My pleasure Navin
A truly mesmerizing piece, dear Navin. The raw self-awareness of the difficulty of the journey to freedom, balanced with the beauty of this same journey. I adore your verse. Much love. ❤️✨
Thank you very much for your wonderful words, dear Jeff….this means a lot to me….much love ❤️ ✨ 🙏
You’re welcome, dearest Navin. Always. Much love. ❤️✨🙏
Loving these fluid lines Navin 🙂
Thank you so very much, Bree ✨
Dear Navin, the pain can be felt when reading this. Poignant yet beautiful 💔
And the end is so true, to accept the present is truly divine. ❤️❤️
Glad to see you back.. 🤝
Dear Preeths, that’s the very essence of this poem….the end, which in reality is the begining coz there’s no end in the present….thank you very much….I’m glad to be back as well ❤️ ✨ 🤗 🤝
Woww…. Your words are truly divine ❤️❤️❤️
Just like yours, dear Ashish 💫❤️ ✨
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Great one!Liked it a lot
Thank you very much! ✨
The depth black and white brings in your poems is mesmerizing…
Thank you very much, Taruchaya ✨
Hej Navin .. dejligt at se dig tilbage .. dette digt er hjerteskærende ..! du udtrykte smerten meget godt .. de ord du har brugt her viser smerten .. meget fantastisk gjort min ven .. Hope all is well..! Hope you are doing great..! Have a beautiful day my friend..!😊✨✨
Tak for det Filarance….tak for dine fine ord….det er også dejligt at komme tilbage….jeg er glad at du godt kunne lide mine ord….I’m doing exactly I’m supposed to be….thx…have a peaceful & wonderful day, my friend ✨
du er meget velkommen kære Navin .. og jeg er ked af det sene svar .. hav en smuk og farverig dag ..!✨
Du må ikke være ked af…altid skriv når det passer dig 💫
Sikker på min ven .. hvor venlig du er !!✨✨
Wow Navin this poem truly moved in layer upon layer opening to the new and divine chapters of our lives. Lovely done my friend. 💖
I’m glad you liked my poem…I’m peeling an onion…well, metaphorically…thank you very much for your lovely words, Cindy ❤️ ✨ 🙏
It truly seems as such Navin which is so powerful and healing. I love it and you’re so welcome. 💖💖❤️🤗🌷
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This is so expressive Navin! Absolutely beautiful ❤
Thank you very much for reading & liking my poem, dear Ishita 🙏❤️💫
Glad your back!
Thank you!
Dying to reset again is so profound. I love this line especially. ❤️ beautiful poem.
Thank you very much for your lovely words, Deborah 🙏❤️💫
Wow! This really is so beautiful. There’s something great and and extraordinary about this. The pain, the optimistic thought really captivated my mind …
“Dying once again to reset my life”
“Accepting my present is truly divine”….
I guess so and somehow this line made my day. It’s truly magical. Keep up your good work.
Oh wow, I’m deeply touched by your heartfelt words….this means a lot to me that you could connect with my lines….thank you very much, Aanchal 🙏💫
That’s an extraordinary poem. Profound. The finale is epic
“Accepting my present is truly divine”
xoxo
Thank you very much for your lovely words, dear Gabriela 🙏✨🤍💫
My pleasure 🌹
Deeply enriched and brilliant 👏 ❤
Thank you very much, dearest Keza ❤️ ✨ 🙏
Thank you, dearest Keza ❤️ ✨
Ur very welcome 🙏 Thank u
A beautiful poem, Navin. So many rich and powerful lines that pull together into a profound whole.
Thank you very much for your heartfelt words….I’m delighted & honoured ✨
My pleasure.
Beautifully expressed Navin….
Thank you very much Piyush….nice to see you after a long time ✨
You’re welcome Navin… it’s been tough few months…great to be back
Hoping you’re doing well, Piyush ✨
“The nothingness I wear is dragon size” and “The new state is staging the wise” are absolutely gorgeous lines! Beautiful poem!
Thank you very much! 🙏
This is so captivating♥😍
Thank you very much 💫