It’s like knowing the perfect recipe to heal
But I keep struggling to cook it to perfection, is what I truly feel
It’s just not the same story on auto-repeat
Snapping from time to time on my loving family
When I loose my patience & forget how to evenly breathe
Everything explodes in that moment into pieces with just a simple breeze
The photo collage on my real & tainted screen
Keep changing constantly from the shallow to the deep
As if I’m digging my own grave on my ground to hide in eternity
It’s driving me to the drive-in of pure insanity
Making me to cry, roar & then scream crazily
The love from my caring friends & loving family
The knitted meetings with the neuro psychologist weekly
Those amazing physio & ergo therapies from professional therapists
The great understanding & patience from my work colleagues
This compelling effect is pulling me out of my hell & anxiety
Building the mental & physical strength to supersede the weaker me
It’s setting “the uptight me” to the flames firely
Let me be & let me breathe before I dive from the top to fly freely
Is the mantra that I need to say to my-I quite frequently
This is how I live this life these days from the heart that’s beating the beads
I’m simply learning to heal the daunting dots inside & on top of me
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A lot of fire in this form…Amazing exchange of power and expression….thank you for sharing…Much love Flowic
Thanks & much love….Willow
You had me at the very first words. It’s like we know what we should do… but it just doesn’t come out right
I’m “glad” to hear that I’m not the only one who feels like that
💙☯️🦋 like clouds emotions drift in and out, at times out of our control
That’s very much true…Blue…Got inspired by your cloud pic…so I took this one a few days back, while I was sitting outside in my garden…taking a breath…plus I love clouds…the shapes, the forms & the stories they tell…💙
We all lose our patience at times… It can be hard to control. ❤️
Well penned piece once again sir!!!
Thanks a lot Hal…but hey, wassup with Sir? 🤨In my head, I hear “Sir Mix-a-lot” 😂
🤪😁 lol!!! It just popped out!!!
😂😁
Beautifully penned, very honest and raw. Well done!
Thanks Lucy!
Epic, Navin. An epic “confession.” The imagery is unbelievable. Metaphors speak.
“It’s like knowing the perfect recipe to heal
But I keep struggling to cook it to perfection”
From there everything unfolds.. an universe of feeling.. and the reader follows you into the corners of your soul.
You are a great talent. I am in love with your poems.
The words “thank you very much” aren’t deep enough to express how I feel…but I wish to add, I wish to reveal…it means a lot what you think of my poetry…I feel emotional & quite happy….so gratitude all the way, whole heartedly 🙏 ❤️
My pleasure Navin. I meant every word. You take the reader with you in your soul. You are a very powerful writer. I wish I would have that power.
Much love to you.
I’m humbled…believe me. Your power is immense…have you read your poetry? Sounds silly, right? By that, I’m simply describing how powerful your poems are…the emotions, the imagery, the depths, the heart, the soul, the passion….even the photos are crazy amazing….I’m not just writing all this to give you a compliment on a compliment from you….this is what I feel when I read your poetry
You really humble me Navin. I feel. I write. If I read read again what I wrote the impact of my own writings on me is pretty mild. Yet the impact on me of your writings and that of other writers who I admire is really strong. That’s the way I am. That’s me. Or at least a part of me 🙂
Yours
G.
It’s like the diamond doesn’t know its worth & beauty…not being materialistic though…I’m sure, you know exactly what I’m saying….G
I know. You are so kind. Thank you.
Some vibrant thoughts lurking in here.. Nicely penned!
Thanks Piyush 🙂
Very strong write dear Navin ✍
Thank you very much, dear Keza 🙏
No no…thank u for ur wonderful writings🙏
You are kind 🙏
And u r a fine writer/poet 🥀🖤
Thank you, dear Keza…you must know…So are you…a fine poet / writer….your poems have variety with great depths…how’s it going with your articles?
I’m still in the process of researching a few more things then they can get typed up. I’m stillnpld school writing drafts on paper first.
That’s a good way….to draft on paper first👍….I would be glad to read when your article is published…am simply curios 😊
Ok
If I could only spell curious 🧐
Posting 2 new songs today….
Looking forward….
Ok 1 done…love the lyrics
Ok I did 4…they r all fantastic 😉🤠🥊
Cool…I’ve now listened to Fefe’s songs…I can see why you’ve picked those songs 🖤
Oh yes 😉
❤️🖤
I dive from the top to fly freely….I can picture that and you fly magically….
Your beautiful heart is the door to your beautiful being….the words you say, I would remember til eternity….
..and you my Dear Navin, are a part of my eternity…
❤️