Clicking my jaws
Flipping my flaws
Painting my falls
Skipping my pulse
Breaking my calm
Screaming my raw
Caging my thoughts
Snapping my bars
Forming my sword
Slitting my form
Revealing my scars
Bleeding my drops
Paining my dark
Chaining my dawn
Burying my ground
Burning my whole
Freeing my soul
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Many revaluations in this, to finding your yin/yang.
🙏🏼💙😊🌷
revelations*
True….that’s what I’m finding, Blue….it’s amazing how you see things at a different level 🙏💙✨
Seems like you’re doing just as great B-)
You can say that 😊
Paining my dark
Chaining my dawn
Burying my ground
Burning my whole
Freeing my soul
Those insightful lines reveals many meanings for me. ❤️❤️ I am glad you are getting better and overcoming the bad through good. Beautiful poem Navin.🥰🤗
I’m glad you liked my poetry, Preeths….thank you very much ✨❤️😊
I loved the ebb and flow of this
Thank you very much, Tara ✨
ewwww liking this sooo much! 💖💖💖 you’re busing out!
Thanks a lot for your words, dear Cindy 🙏❤️
Always, always! 💖🌷🙏
and that should have been awwww not ewww 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Lol…I did get it 😂🤣❤️
I THOUGHT U DID! 💖💖🤣
So deep and revealing. 👏
Thanks Secrets….thanks for your support ✨
This is brilliant! You said so many things in such a few words. This piece is marvellous.
Take care Navin🖤
Thank you very much, Ishita….very much appreciate your words 🖤✨
My pleasure😊
A deep poem, loved the flow❤️💐
Thank you very much, Diana ✨ ❤️
You are strong to see freedom and feel the pain. <3
Such supporting words help quite a lot as well 🙏❤️
You slayed the pain. That is super. Giving strength to the ones who need it. Powerful words.
The feelings, the rhythm… Exceptional.
Thank you very much, dear Gabriela….
My pleasure 🥰🌹🌸
I love this piece Navin. It has a great feel to it. Also it says so much with small burst of emotion. Lovely work dear Navin. Sending honeysuckle and lavender that has been touched by the moon. Love, light and blessings coming too. Hugs 🤗 Joni
Thank you very much….even your comments are so poetic, dear Joni….I’m blessed….much love & light ❤️ ✨
Shedding an old skin can be difficult but needs to be done 🙏
It’s quite true….it’s literally tearing me apart as I shed it very slowly 🙏🖤
Wonderful cadence. Every once in a blue moon I write something that I like the cadence of. It’s not a thing I’m good at. I liked reading this aloud
Thank you…I’m glad you liked the cadence…have you ever thought of spoken word?
I’ve thought of it, I’ve even heard it before 😋
Try it ✨
Each line is like its own little poem. Then joining it with the one before or the one after, and eventually with the whole really strikes the soul. Thank you for sharing such a deeply emotional piece with so many different gems within it. 💛
Thank you very much for your heartfelt words….they mean a lot, dear Hamish 🙏❤️
Beautiful blog. 🔷️🙏🏻
Thank you very much 🙏 ✨
Very welcome Navin.