Freeing my Soul

Freeing my Soul

Clicking my jaws
Flipping my flaws
Painting my falls
Skipping my pulse
Breaking my calm
Screaming my raw
Caging my thoughts
Snapping my bars
Forming my sword
Slitting my form
Revealing my scars
Bleeding my drops
Paining my dark
Chaining my dawn
Burying my ground
Burning my whole
Freeing my soul

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38 thoughts on “Freeing my Soul”

      1. True….that’s what I’m finding, Blue….it’s amazing how you see things at a different level 🙏💙✨

  1. Paining my dark
    Chaining my dawn
    Burying my ground
    Burning my whole
    Freeing my soul
    Those insightful lines reveals many meanings for me. ❤️❤️ I am glad you are getting better and overcoming the bad through good. Beautiful poem Navin.🥰🤗

  2. I love this piece Navin. It has a great feel to it. Also it says so much with small burst of emotion. Lovely work dear Navin. Sending honeysuckle and lavender that has been touched by the moon. Love, light and blessings coming too. Hugs 🤗 Joni

    1. Thank you very much….even your comments are so poetic, dear Joni….I’m blessed….much love & light ❤️ ✨

  3. Each line is like its own little poem. Then joining it with the one before or the one after, and eventually with the whole really strikes the soul. Thank you for sharing such a deeply emotional piece with so many different gems within it. 💛

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