You & I can’t be defined even if we try just like this Universe
The third eye that shines the divine is the energy purely magical
The signs we sight in this life are the intuitions supernatural
The scars that I wire in my I is to revive the deeper connections
The rhymes that I write in line are the lightning of my raw interior
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Wonderful piece, Navin. 💜
Thank you Lauren ✨💟💫
Such a powerful and profound piece, Navin. Brilliant!💕❤️💕
I’m glad you liked it…thank you very much, Grace ✨❤️💫
Truly my pleasure.💕❤️💕
I like this line a lot.
<3
David
I’m delighted to know that…thank you very much, David ❤️
This was great,even if short.I loved the lines
“The third eye that shines the divine is the energy purely magical
The signs we sight in this life are the intuitions supernatural
”
Beautifully written 😀
Thank you very much for your lovely words…there’s a reason it’s short 😊💫
And what may that be,if I may ask?I’m just curious 😄
Haha…let it be a mystery for the time being 😊
Aww…ok fine let it be so,I’ll probably solve it in time…❤
You’ll definitely ❤️
Intense and powerful though short! 😍
Thank you for liking my writing, Hemalatha…there’s a reason it’s short ✨❤️💫
Beautifully written !
Thank you very much, Era!
You’re welcome!
Such a great piece my friend, I love your rhythmic flow. Looking forward to reading more of your work, thanks for sharing!
I’m delighted & honoured to read you connected with my piece…thank you very much 💫
👍
Oh I really love this wisdom in words and the ethers you encapsulate so raw Dear Navin. Wonderfully penned my friend💖🎃
Thank you for your heartfelt words, Cindy…I appreciate them very much, my dear friend ✨❤️💫
You’re so welcome dear Navin!
You are a blessing my friend-:)💕🎃🙏
So are you 🙏❤️🌟
Thank you from the deepest part of my heart 💖
This is stunning! Stunning!
xoxoxo
I’m glad you liked my writing…Thank very much, dear Gabriela ✨🙏❤️
My pleasure Navin. I hope everything is well with you 🥰🌺🌸🌹
Everything is as it’s supposed to be in the present, Gabriela…thanks for asking 🙏🥰💫🤍✨
My pleasure Navin. Take care.
🙏❤️…you too take care dear Gabriela ✨
Really powerful… there’s a storm of thoughts that rages in your mind…too deep to comprehend at times but then no one else can be YOU, Navin!
Thank you for such beautiful words, Taruchaya…I’m delighted to read them 💫
A profound piece, so wonderfully done. I really liked the last line.
Thank you very much for your lovely words, Shruthi ✨
You’re welcome!
Stunningly beautiful…💖💫
Thank you so very much, beautiful soul 🙏 ❤️ ✨
Thank you very much 🙏✨❤️
I love the way you weave a story, and refer back to the way you are creating it through the construction of your poems. Very clever and enjoyable to read!
I’m glad to know that you enjoyed my poem…thank you very much, dear Hamish!