I’m just a dot if you zoom out to see the spot on this beautiful & lively zone
That’s all you want if you wish to lock when you hold the schaft & look patiently through the scope
I’ll turn into thick fog if you take a shot with your tainted thoughts painted with senseless strokes
You dreamt that I would rot when you put the mark at my heart from the other side of the shore
You better check your clock coz I’m on your watch to put a stop on your timeless goal
I know you wish & want but you simply can’t block coz I’m simply a free & formless soul
It’s the way I talk whether you like it or not but I’ll free you from the twisted knots crippling your core
I promise I won’t haunt from the very top to crop your vulnerable & shielded ghost
Coz I’ve walked on the path full of thorns & my drops that looked like the bed of roses
So I’ll simply take you to the dark to show you the burning sparks from daunting dot of beautiful hope
—– A Dot of Hope —–
A Dot of Hope is a multidimensional poem, that portrays the importance of hope, when we feel as if nothing can be done to dissolve the pattern; to come out of the pain body. When you are in touch with the inner peace, nothing can break you. You can also help others to come out of their patterns by guiding them in the right direction, by showing them that little dot of hope.
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Please check poem about: Inner Peace (1), Libra Heart (2), Brewing (3)
From little things, big things grow…
That’s very true, my friend….
The last stanza is my very fave! A voice that asks you to be yourself and true but is willing to show you more… That’s the voice I heard in your poem. ☺️
That’s the essence of this poem….you’re spot on, Q ✨
Beautifully written !
Thank you, Era!
Anytime !
Beautiful writing, makes me think of sitting around a camp fire, where often the silences say more than the words.
Thank you….and yeah, sometimes silence speaks more than the words….it’s the deeper connection
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The last stanza👌
Thank you 😊✨
Beautifully done once again!! 🙌 The last stanza made it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Also thank you for the link!!!! 😍😍😍 I’m honored!!
Thank you, Hal!! I’m glad you liked my poem ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️. It’s my honor to have you on my post ✨🥰🤟
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“Coz I’ve walked on the path full of thorns & my drops that looked like the bed of roses”.
Great post, Navin.
I felt each line of this beautiful piece. ❤
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I’m so glad that you felt my poetry 🙏❤️✨
Wow, what use of words..glowing layers of thoughts…
Thanks for your beautiful comment….”glowing layers of thoughts”….is like being naked to show the soul….
Good morning my dearest Navin (Soon it will be morning for you – it will be morning soon: is this a scene from Romeo and Juliet? 🙂 )
“So I’ll simply take you to the dark to show you the burning sparks from daunting dot of beautiful hope” Splendid! The entire poem is splendid. The construction is magnificent: moments of past passion; transformation; formless promises with hidden meanings.
You are a magician. Your words are fire, ice, and mystery.
Your poetry blows me away.
Love
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What a beautiful comment, dearest Gabriela. Not only are you a magnificent, amazing, crazily sweet, kind & down to earth writer, you’re also amazing in “decoding” my poem….”moments of past passion; transformation; formless promises with hidden meanings”….love🌹🙏✨
You deserve plenty of praise. Love right back at you 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Wonderful poem Navin!
Thanks a lot, Ishita!
This is so well-written!! Touched my heart 🙂
Oh…I’m so delighted to know that. Thank you kindly ✨
Lovely poem, Navin! Absolutely loved it
Thanks a lot for your lovely comment, Rishika! ✨
Your posts are nice. You can also visit my blog and gives your important comments.
Thanks Vikas. I’ll definitely check your blog.
Woww!!
Thanks!!
Such a beautiful message told with divine writing, Navin. It is so true that with hope we are stronger than we think. Our minds are so powerful.
Thanks a lot for such a beautiful comment, Katy. Yeah, we’re stronger & powerful with our minds & hearts ✨🙏
Well penned…👍
Thank you very much ✨
Even in the dark there is always hope. Can u see when u r in ur dark? I live in mine…
Oh yeah, there’s always hope….darkness is another form of light….check this out….https://navinspoetry.com/relatable-quote-2/
Strong thought.
A dot of hope can make wonders !!
Oh yeah, it really can!! 🙏✨
Indeed 😊
Just a perfect read at this time! Hope is definitely powerful. You expressed it so wonderfully. Loved the way you showed hope to all the readers through this!
Thank you very much for such a wonderful words✨
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Yes, I believe this line “When you are in touch with the inner peace, nothing can break you.” We all are need to find our inner peace.
I’m glad you could connect with that line…We certainly need to find that inner peace…
I’ve said this before but I’ll say it again..your mind is beautiful and a day to crawl and nestle into it is a devine experience…
Thank you very much for your beautiful words. I’m deeply touched…