When I sit on my hot seat to see the lively scenes on my fractured screen with absolutely no screams, everything seems seamlessly lovely & spotless from the safe distance of those crazy complexities
Just let me be & let me breathe and let me see, if you can really see through, when I project my transparency of the transparent me through the window, that transpires the red ink into the frame of moist & mixed feelings
You see, it’s not possible to understand a single word if the divinity of this world won’t be unfolded coz the understated unknown energies are being underrated & underestimated by the human nature, that’s simply busy in blowing the overrated & meaningless smoking swirls, generated by some useless extrapolation of quite simple assumptions, which in turn takes the mankind to the senseless & rusted junctions
So many different meanings of a pretty simple thing is just like demonizing the simplicity & degrading the cold feeling after the aftermath of burning flames, when it’s very much possible to sense the unseen but still, one keeps throwing the senseless theories without actually smelling the essence of pure simplicity & acknowledging the power of the unseen energies
It’s senseless if you try to make sense of every single word separately, but if you simply sense the flow of pure energy, you’ll see a whole deeper dimension of this crazy scribbling
So do you get now the complexity of simply complicating the simplicity of simply me?
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My dearest Navin, words can’t describe how much I love this piece. It is seriously divine on so many levels! While reading, I truly felt like your words were a reflection of my mind. So many times I was like “YES”…I just deeply resonate with this piece. Especially that second to last paragraph, it is so powerfully written! Amazingly done, my amazing Navin 🖤🤗
*2nd to last AND 3rd to last…but honestly this whole post blows me away!!!
Oh my….My dearest Ace, reading your beyond beautiful words is igniting the colorful fireworks in me….by me, I mean my soul….if my soul were made of light smoke….and if I touch your light in my core….then it would dance freely in outer space….while my body is actually resting on my bed….can you sense the joy from my words, it ain’t a wordplay….it’s purely the reflection of your “YES” 🤍🤗 💫
Awwwww 😊, what an amazing reply! I can sense the joy, my friend 🤗. You are so so kind…truly an honor to be your reflection and to be reflected by you 💫
I knew you would, my dear friend….the feeling is mutual✨🤍💫🤗
Dear Navin, I love how you title this. 💖 Truly, it does make sense to me.
Only you can write such deepest thoughts
and make us feel what you intended. Amazing write as always. Finally your picture in WP ❣️❣️
Very well said. Such pure and true words have been delivered. “It’s senseless if you try to make sense of every single word separately, but if you simply sense the flow of pure energy, you’ll see a whole deeper dimension of this crazy scribbling”. Especially with these lines, it’s divine and so well said
I’m delighted that you connected with these lines….thank you very much for your heartfelt words, Aanchal 🙏 ✨ ❤️ 💫
My gratitude to you, dear Preeths…heartfelt words from you…I’m glad you felt my writing….well, the other picture (the half face) is also mine ✨❤️
Very well written.You’ve gone deep, I see
Thank you very much….I very much appreciate your words…
Reading this poem again was even more magical. I love this piece, dearest Navin. Much love. ❤✨
You’re very kind & supportive….thank you so very much, dearest Jeff….it means a lot to me 🙏 ❤️ ✨ 🤗
Is always my pleasure, dearest Navin. You are most welcome. ❤️🤗🙏✨
Omg. The way you started the first stanza, each and every detailings are so minute and intricate. This post is full of emotions that are deep and very deep. Amazingly done as always! ❤️
Oh wow….I’m delighted to read your beautiful words….thank you very much that you enjoyed my writing, Hemalatha ✨❤️💫
Such beautiful reflections Navin with so much depth and meaning. What a testament to you and honoring your process and insights. 💖❣️ ❤️
Thank you very much for your lovely words, dear Cindy….I’m glad you liked my writing 🙏 ❤️ ✨ 🤗
You’re so welcome Navin and I love that picture of you! 👏❤️👏
Thank you so very much, Cindy ❤️🙏✨
Pleasure always/ 💖💖💖
You’re sooo welcome!💖
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Deep ,poignant writing…. loved this
I’m glad you liked it….Thank you very much, Piyush
You’re always welcome Navin…