Tear my eyes to ocean
Tear my body into pieces
Break open the dark skies
Break me into phases
Paint my face in thick red
Paint my phrase to crazy
Pain me till I feel the edges
Pain me to find the inner space
Falling from top of the hill
Falling to reach my grounding
Diving to kill the killzone
Diving to meet the unknown
Dying to repair the top shelf
Dying to reborn my whole self
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13 thoughts on “Reblogging – Painting this Picture”
Powerful and profound piece, Navin. Love it.💕
“Falling from top of the hill
Falling to reach my grounding”💕💕💕
Thank you very much, dear Grace…I’m glad you liked my poem…thank you for your lovely support as well 🙏✨💟💫
Always such a pleasure to read your magnificent words, Navin.💕💕💕
I do love this poem and the ending is wonderful Navin. a wonderful powerful piece! 👏
Thank you very much, Cindy….I’m glad to know ✨❤️💫
You’re so welcome and deserving Navin.. !!! 💖💖💖
I love the structure and flow of this poem, dearest Navin. It’s amazing. ✨❤️💫🥰
My gratitude to you, dearest Jeff…you’re amazing ✨❤️✨🥰
Aww, thank you; you’re most welcome, dearest Navin. It’s always my pleasure to read you. Always. ✨❤️🌹🥰
Lovely this imagist and tangible poem!
Thank you very much, Jaya…I’m glad you liked my poem ✨
This courage is shown only by a heart warrior – unafraid to die any and all deaths from within – to be reborn again. Absolutely beautiful powerful energy your poetry brings.
And your soulful words bring the wisdom with the glowing touch of your aura…a “thank you” isn’t enough to express my gratitude, Pragalbha…but do know that I’m truly grateful ✨🙏💫💟