Sometimes my screen freezes instantly with slippery breeze of swirling intense seas & then it seems that I’m firmly sealed in this patented Rubik’s C made of patterned cubical bricks where I skip some beats when I forget to simply breathe due to high latency of my wired screams as I’m letting scenes of those caged memories to run through my tears where I fall as leaves in my sleepless dream coz I can’t fall asleep
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10 thoughts on “Sometimes”
A wonderful emotional ride. Love it, Navin.💕
Thank you very much, dear Grace 🙏✨💟💫
Wow my friend! You have painted a portrait so vividly of insomnia, the mind won’t go to sleep, and you held prisoner by wakefulness, tumble out this gorgeous poem, these lines that invite us to read them again like, “I skip some beats when I forget to simply breathe due to high latency of my wired screams ” I have been there at 3am too and I feel you.
I’m glad that you liked my poem…you’ve been there too…that’s not so great…but that’s the thing with insomnia…when it hits, it simply hits…thank you very much for reading my poem…and for writing these lovely words, my dear friend ✨
Love your poem with so much imagery Navin! ❤️
My gratitude to you, dear friend ✨💟💫
Oh yes, always gratitude and always grateful for you! 💞
This is lovely Navin. Your descriptive phrases in this pieces are very provocative and reminds me of when I can’t sleep. Sending out hugs and love, Joni
I’m “glad” that you could relate to it…we all must’ve have tried at least once in our lives when we can’t fall asleep…thank you very much for your wonderful words…sending love & hugs your way ✨💟💫🤗