Recently, I had this lovely opportunity to work with my dear friend, Lauren of Lauren M. Hancock Poetry and Prose, to write & record a piece together. Lauren is a poet, painter, violinist and above all, a wonderful, sweet & kind being. Please visit her blog, where you’ll find her heartfelt, soulful, raw poetry, prose & spoken word and her beautiful artwork. My gratitude to Lauren for reaching out to me, to make this happen.
Implore
The breaths I take
The steps I sway
When I dance on my feet
My ground is change
The heights I stare
The case is space
The light has shades
The dark isn’t just pain
I see the sane
When I saw the chain
I tear the deep
When I drop the waves
The colours I blend
The Universe I paint
The eyes then glare
The divine through pen
I expand upon
an inner sense
of personal justice
social soul well meant
I know I know
the ability for
personal growth
is well rooted deep within,
for every passing second
my efforts are tirelessly sown,
my chest expands
my heart, it flows
rich with breath, mighty effort
stallion-like strength –
continuous insistence,
and sound temperament.
our steps in time
pirouetting groundwork
yours and mine
our knowledge together
brought closely in life
we stare down the precipice
and soar, divine,
unknowingly yet aware
we become entwined
intent and more
this World we explore
for reaching our Universe’s heights
sights and sounds
enriching our abilities
our minds implore.
Violin track & artwork by Lauren and video & sound editing by myself.
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Absolutely beautiful, you two! Great job.
Thank you very much, Michael.
What a thought provoking and intensely charming spoken word poem! I love it Navin. This was a good collabo.
Thank you very much Lamittan ✨🙏💫
Wow! This is incredible , my friends. Love seeing two of my favorites collaborate. Wonderful .💕❤️💕
Oh wow, thank you very much for your lovely words…I’m truly honoured, Grace 🙏✨❤️💫
This is stunning, guys… could you say a bit about how you brought this into existence?
<3
David
Thank you very much, David…Lauren & I wrote this piece impromptu…we decided to do a spoken word…recorded the voice & violin…stitched everything together om this form 😊✨❤️💫
This 👌👌👌. Loved everything about this poem!! ❣️❣️ Great job you both. 🤝
Thank you very much, dear Preeths…I’m glad you liked this collab 🤝✨🤗💫
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🙏✨💙💫😊
Woooooow, how wonderful! A stunning collaboration
Thank a lot, dear Bree…nice to know you liked this piece 💫
Such a wonderful collab my friends.. gorgeous and love your voices entwined building and beautiful crescendo!💖💖💖
My gratitude to you for your lovely words, Cindy…we both loved the collaboration ✨❤️💫🌺
A beautiful collaboration. The background music is a lovely addition. 🎻
Thank you very much, dear Michele…Lauren played the violin to give the extra dimension💫
My pleasure. Thank you!
This is incredibly beautiful collaboration, flawless flow. The painting evokes the experience of the poem – as if painting so many lines recited in color. The word choices are brilliant –
“When I dance on my feet
My ground is change”
“The light has shades
The dark isn’t just pain”
“The colours I blend
The Universe I paint
The eyes then glare
The divine through pen”
These felt so amazing to read!
The entire poem conveys such conviction of beauty and grace of life in all shades.
Such beautiful, wonderful, heartfelt, magnificent words from you…Delighted & honoured that you liked the writing & the flow of this poem…the collaboration…I’m deeply touched you must know…. my utmost gratitude to you 🙏✨🤍💫
My pleasure and privilege truly _()_
Wow. You two wonderful human beings, this is such a gorgeous collaborative spoken word. I loved it. ❤️🙏☺️🌺🌹🥰
Thank you very much for your lovely words, dearest Jeff….you’re always there with your beautiful support…that means a lot to me 🙏✨❤️💫🤗🥰🌟
You’re most welcome, dearest Navin. Always. It’s my honor and privilege to know you and be here. ❤️🙏🌹🥰🌺
🙏✨❤️💫🥰🌟
Wow, wonderful poem! The recital and the violin track blended together so beautifully. I enjoyed the artwork as well. What a lovely collaboration!
I’m glad to read your lovely words, Shruthi…thank you very much for liking the poem & the spoken word…the artwork plus the violin track by Lauren 💫
You’re welcome!
Excellent poem and recitation.
xoxo
I’m glad you liked the poem & the recitation…thank you so very much, dearest Gabriela ✨
Always 🌺🌸🌹❤️
Read mine too motivational thaughts and poetry