I recorded this video of my multicolored LED bulb…Music created in GarageBand
You can find this poem in my book – Lightning Rhymes
Is everything changing?
Is the mind chattering?
Is the body shattering?
Is the rhyme flowing?
Is the rhythm beating?
Is the ink bleeding?
Is the colour red beets?
Is that beast feasting?
The Red Feast
Is the heartbeat racing?
Is the air slowly fading?
Is the screen getting blurry?
Am I simply afraid?
Has the time stopped moving?
Have I started reaching places?
Am I going crazy?
Do you get what’s happening?
Can you sense the feeling?
Are you here to catch me?
Are you one of those preachers?
Do you come from the shadows?
Is this all a part of me?
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16 thoughts on “Spoken Word – Questioning”
I listen to on IG. Absolutely stunning. What a piece: the rhythm, the sense of inevitability, the passion.
I’m delighted that you liked my spoken word…thank you very much, dearest Gabriela 🙏✨💟💫
Thank you very much, Maggie ✨
Amazing piece, my friend .💕
my gratitude to you, dear Grace ✨💟💫
So powerful and so well done… Navin!! The flashing light circle, the perfect rhythmic changes in the music..your voice, like I have never heard it…you let loose, and your passion carried your lines!! A big Wow…so well done and I love each word-choice in each line.. What you say..how you say it (your voice trembling rising and falling)..It’s an incredible performance piece..of an incredible poem. Bravo my friend…Bravo!!! I love how you just let go….and took us with you🌹❤️🌹
A big WOW to you for writing such beautiful & heartfelt words…This means a lot to me…when I was recording my voice, it was like going back to that moment when I wrote this poem…I have this multicolor LED bulb…so I decided to record the video of this bulb, that’s representing me & those colours, my different phases…and the music I created in GarageBand was intuitive…it’s more about connecting with my own beat in that moment…my gratitude to you for reading, listening, sharing your reflection & seeing me, dear Karima ✨❤️💫🙏
My pleasure Navin and I love when you trust your instinct, push your envelopes, go beyond what you’ve done…It’s exciting to watch your process, your confidence grow! It’s so powerful!
Love hearing your voice delivering you well done poem Navin! The build up and climax was outstanding! 🥰
I’m delighted to know that…thank you very much, Cindy ✨💟💫
So lovely piece! And a wonderful voice 🙂💖
My gratitude to you, dear KK…I’m honoured ✨💟✨
My pleasure, always 😊