The sky paints this transparent scene
The clouds are floating freely
The sun rays pass through the beams
The nature of magical energies
The airwaves sync the melody
The highs & lows flow exquisitely
The ripples are echoing the sea
The ground is rooting my feet
The track is ripping my skin
The layers are burning to thin
The time is watching it still
The drops are cleansing the film
The naked is pure not obscene
The change is to unchain the theme
The patterns are revealing the unseen
The scars are opening the deep
The seam is melting cracked piece
The noise is filtered to peace
The voice I break is to feel
The rhyme I ride is to be
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Oh wow, my dear Navin….this is simply stunning! I was captivated the moment I heard your voice and deeply intrigued throughout. The power in your voice adds so much life to your words…truly an honor to listen!! This poem is absolutely divine. The vivid imagery and striking flow is so deeply beautiful and empowering. Amazingly done, my special friend. This is truly beyond words…I can still hear your voice echoing in my head 🤗🖤
Idk if it’s the onions or the emotions….or it’s a mix of both….the peeling & healing effect of your heartfelt words…I’m deeply touched is what I’m trying to say….I truly cherish your words….it’s like the Sky is directly speaking to me….My gratitude to you, my unique friend….much love ✨ 🤗 🤍💫
A stunning 2nd last stanza, Navin….
“The naked is pure not obscene
The change is to unchain the theme
The patterns are revealing the unseen
The scars are opening the deep”
Thank you very much, dear Ivor….I’m glad you liked the 2nd stanza….that means a lot to me 🙏 ❤️
My pleasure Navin
Oh dear Navin, this is such a gorgeous write. 👏👏 It feels amazing to hear your voice giving life to this poetry. ❤️
I am loving it….. My favourite lines are these…
The naked is pure not obscene
The change is to unchain the theme
The patterns are revealing the unseen
The scars are opening the deep!
Thank you for sharing your beautiful work with us.
Oh dear Preeths, I’m delighted to read your heartfelt words….Thank you so very much for reading my poem & listening to my voice….Much love ✨ 🤗 ❤️
Your words hang in the air like those tiny particles that float in sunbeams, sublime 🙂
Oh wow, I’m speechless after reading your comment….Thank you very much 🙏 ✨
Oh my …. How absolutely stunning is your spoken word!! You recite the words with such conviction !! It’s impossible not to get drowned in your words. Really well done, Navin. There’s so much power and truth in ever line of this brilliant poem. Stay blessed and keep writing dear friend 💕🌈🤗🥰🌹
Dear Diana, your heartfelt words means a lot to me….You’re always there with your melting words & support….thank you so very much for liking my writing & the spoken word….much love 🤗✨❤️💫🥰
Love your voice and narration. It gives depth to your words. It’s absolutely amazing 😍
Thank you very much, dear Ashish….I’m glad you liked my spoken word 🙏❤️✨
Absolutely, most welcome 🙂😊
This is gorgeous Navin. Just too amazing. Bravo!
Thank you, dear Ishita….thank you for always been there with your support n lovely words!
Most welcome Navin, dear!
This is lovely Navin!
Thank you Vignesh!
Woww !! Navin, dette er fantastisk ..! Jeg elskede det virkelig ..! Og din stemme, omg !! Jeg er målløs!! Aww !! Jeg elskede din stemme, der sagde livspoesi ..! Wow! Min ven, jeg er smigret af dine skrifter ..! Jeg kan ikke vælge min yndlings strofe, for hele digtet blev dit yndlingsdigt ..! Dette er meget smukt, min ven ..! Hav en god aften ..! 😊✨
Jeg glemmer alt når jeg læser dine fine ord på dansk, Filarance….tusind tak fordi du kunne lide mit digt og min stemme….det værdsætter jeg meget….ha’ en fortsat god aften ✨ 🙏
åh min ven, jeg er meget glad for at høre dette fra dig ..! og du er meget velkommen ..! det er min fornøjelse ..! 😊✨
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Always stunning, dearest Navin Lovely verse, and an equally lovely reading. Much love, my dear friend. ❤️✨🙏
Thank you very much for liking my poem & spoken word, dearest Jeff…you’re a priceless gem….much love ❤️ ✨ 🙏
You’re most welcome, dear Navin. Is my complete pleasure. Thank you, my friend, that is so kind. ❤✨🙏
Yours words deeply resonant as does your reading, my friend. 💙🙏🏼😊✨
Thank you very much, my dear friend Blue….I am always very grateful to see you drop by….reading, listening & supporting my writing….I am blessed 🙏✨💙💫😊
It is my pleasure to do so, Navin. May you have a wonderful day. 😊💙🤗🌼
My gratitude, Blue….I wish you a beautiful day with inner blue sky 💙😊✨🤗
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Hello, I have left my comments on this poem before! I like the picture, interesting to see it in black and white! Nature inspired this?!
Yeah, you did leave your lovely comment on IG…I took this picture in the woods…I wrote this poem much before I took the picture…when I was going through my photos, this one stood out right away ✨
Haha… the picture “felt” right! 🙂
Absolutely….it felt right….right away 😊✨
The last stanza was amazing! Through your voice and words we can see the beauty of nature <3
I’m glad you liked my poem & voice….Thank you very much for your lovely words, dear Rinum 🙏✨🤍
Gorgeous poem and gorgeous recitation.
xoxoxo
Thank you very much, dear Gabriela 🙏✨🤍
My pleasure.
xoxo
Your words…I have no words.
I’m speechless….thank you ✨
‘The change is to unchain the theme’ super amazing weaving. Love the poetry.
Thank you very much, Kritika….I’m glad you liked my poem ✨ 😊
This is stunningly beautiful………❤
Thank you so very much 🙏 ❤️ ✨
It’s a pleasure
Gorgeous read ❤️
truly a wonderful piece so beautifully expressed in words and hearing your voice was so lovely Navin..Love the cleansing feeling to this poem. wonderful poem my friend.. 💖💖💖
I’m delighted to read that you liked my poem in words & spoken word forms….thank you very much….much love, dear Cindy ❤️ ✨ 🙏 💫
You are soooo welcome!!! it was wonderful!💖
I could feel every word! Beautifully crafted again♥♥! I am surprised as I do remember that I subscribed to you! Idk what is happening! Btw Beautiful work 👍🏻
Thank you for your heartfelt words….I have no idea who you are as I see “Someone” as your blog name ✨🙏