“Just let it go
Don’t hold on to it
Accept the new situation
Keep healing yourself”
Believe me, I know this all
I’m trying to be that whole
But I’m bleeding ink through these holes
As if I’m about to loose my breath & my soul
Immaterial things agitate me to the core
Improper actions are creating infections that sore
Immortal is my rage when I become the evil raw
Imbalanced energy in me is shaking everybody & even more
The feeling of sharp nails pierced in my head
Just before when I get the sensation of not being really heard
Brings forth the crazy moment to detonate my mind into pieces to spread this hurt
And turn whatever I’ve built mindfully into the cloud of dust
I know, inner healing takes its form in the course of time
But what if everything comes to an end while I bleed out every coarse of mine?
What if my screen break loose my hell & there’s no ocean to cry?
What if the scene gets darker while I keep destroying everyone’s life?
So I sit still on the bench in my garden & start to ponder
What’s happening to me & why am I doing these blunders?
Why is my heart causing lightning after the roaring thunder?
That moment I learn, I’m still learning to walk this path to unconditional love & to surrender
If you liked this poem, please like & comment here.
You may also follow @navinspoetry_ on Instagram.
© 2020 Navin’s Poetry. All rights reserved.
20 thoughts on “Surrender”
Powerful… gorgeous.. you are a great poet Navin. 💐
Thanks dear Gabriela 🙏💙
My pleasure Navin.
Courage my friend, your answer lies in your opening lines. 😊💙🦋🙏🏼
Exactly….hence I started the poem with those lines….but bleeding & the side effect of epilepsy meds make it worse as I, from time to time can’t control my irritation…
Sounds like a preacher!
We all can be preachers at times…people do talk from their experiences of their lives…so it’s OK if they suggest, I don’t mind…but when mind is the issue, just like the brain of mine…so, things can be extra difficult, coz sometimes I’m ready to explode just like those red diamond mines
oh ya. we WordPress is a nice place to let it explode B-)
That’s so true 😊🔥
“Why is my heart causing lightning after the roaring thunder?” ❤️❤️❤️❤️ Love this!! Beautiful words Navin!
Thank you very much, Hal ❤️❤️❤️❤️
You’re welcome!! ❤️
Dont be discouraged little dove
What ur looking for resides within
U must let go to really begin
And realize its u that u love
Very beautifully put together, Keza ❤️
Your poetry is deep and dark, like Black Forest deep. Powerful and purposeful verse that cooks the soul raw. Perfection!
Thank you very much for your kind comment Lance. I’m glad you liked my poem 🙂
You’re sincerely welcome, Navin. Yes, absolutely- dark poetry is my favorite!
Then I hope you’ll read some of mine 🙏
I will indeed!