The song is throbbing my inside
And the heart is beating the loud sounds
The moon is hiding in dark sky
As the clouds are acting like greyhounds
The memories are causing red sprites
To light my darkish grey ground
So I sit silently at late night
To embrace the moment with teardrops
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39 thoughts on “Teardrops”
Amazing piece , Navin. Loved every single line. Brilliant.❤️
Thank you very much for liking my writing, Grace 🙏✨❤️
Mmmm. I can feel every beautiful word deep in my heart. Sending you love, my dearest Navin. ❤️✨
I’m glad you could feel the words…that means a lot…thank you very much 🙏 ✨ ❤️
You’re most welcome, dearest Navin. Always. 🙏❤🤗
Beautifully written Navin ☺
Hope you are doing good.
Thank you very much, Era…nice to see you 💫
Always a pleasure 🙂
I have already said how wonderfully crafted this is, but I will say it again 😉 Your ability to create an atmosphere is next level 👏👏👏👏👏👏
Oh my, I’m truly honoured with such a praise….thank you very much, Secrets for your kindness ✨🤗💫
Deep emotional feelings are like atmospheric change, nicely done, Navin. 🙏🏼💙💫🍂
Beautifully said…thank you for reading my poem, Blue 🙏💫💙✨
You’re most welcome, my friend. 😊💙🙏🏼💫🍂
Oh wowww Navin..! This is so deep and touching..! Relatable..! You really expressed very well..! I loved this piece very much..! Fabulous..! Keep shinning my friend..! Have a beautiful day..!✨✨😊
I’m glad you could connect with my poem….Thank you very much for your lovely & sweet words, Filarance ✨🙏😊💫
You’re very welcome Navin..! It’s my pleasure..!😊✨
woww! this was soo deep
Thank you very much, Akshita 💫
Loved the last line, Navin. Very deep! ❤️
Thank you very much for reading my writing & for your lovely words, Hemalatha ✨❤️💫
Very beautiful eloquent evocation ❤
Thank you very much, dear Diana ❤️ ✨
You are most welcome ☺ but my name is not Diana. I wonder where that came from…🙃😅 but it’s not a problem.
Blessings dear poet 🙏 ❤ ✨
Oh my bad…idk why I remember I read once someone wrote Diana to you…my apologies 🙏✨❤️💫
Not a problem at all treasured poet! Very many blessings always in all things! 🙏✍💐❤
I adore your work
Keep up the magnificent write ❤💖✍
Thank you very much….and I adore yours….keep expressing from your heart 💫❤️✨
It’s a pleasure! 💖🌺💖
I can feel each word so powerfully expressed that lights up the dark sky of your big heart Navin❣️ Lots of love to you always my dear friend.
Thank you very much for your heartfelt words, dear Cindy….much love 🙏✨❤️💫🤗
You’re so welcome Dear Navin and thanks for the love. you as well!💖
As always..magical words✍🏻👌🏻
Thank you very much, dear Athira…I’m grateful that you liked my poem…
Always welcome Navin!
I can’t describe it exactly..but when I see it, hear it, I know it’s yours.once again Navin. You have such a unique turn of phrase. This line, so visual and surreal. “As the clouds are acting like greyhounds” I see those clouds grey and sleek, sprinting quickly across the sky. This is a wonderful piece, telling and confessional…I love that you are not afraid to be vulnerable…That is real strength and you paint it so well through your amazing poetry.
It’s my honour that you can recognize my writing…I felt that line so strongly that all I had to do was to write it down…can you imagine it all started with a song…a unique voice…that connected me to a special memory of a beautiful soul…that night was tough…thank you very much for liking my writing, dear Karima…
Con mucho gusto Navin, i very much enjoy reading you.