The Deep Ocean

Original poetry

I see you so clear
Your sense is so real
The flow in the veins
It all feels so intense
Looking at the sky
Shaken to the very core
The beats fluctuate
The ground resonates
Listening to its tiny voice
Giving attention and warmth
Accepting it whatever it is
Irrespective of its form
Feeling weak and little broken
Wearing bare skin without layers
I am no one but an explorer
Searching myself in the deep ocean

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16 thoughts on “The Deep Ocean”

  1. Beautiful, lyrical,calming images and profound feelings. I vibrate to this new poem of yours my friend. The ocean mystifies, heals and intrigues. You have painted your own still life, bare-skinned poet contemplating it’s majestic expanse and depth. You have made me feel enchanted me today too.I love this poem! ❤️

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    1. You left me with this great feeling of “Oh wow”…your kindness, open senses & keen eyes are able to see beneath the surface…I’m delighted & honoured to read your heartfelt & wonderful feedback…thank you very much, my dear friend…I’m grateful to you, Karima ✨❤️💫

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  4. I truly love this poem, it is so moving beautiful and reminds me of so many of my truths.

    Feeling weak and little broken
    Wearing bare skin without layers
    I am no one but an explorer
    Searching myself in the deep ocean

    These lines invite me in to stay with them, for the experience feels familiar.

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    1. How beautiful & moving it is for me to read your wonderful words…my poem reminds you of so many of your truths – it gives me WOW feeling…thank you very much for reading my poem & for connecting with my lines ✨🙏💫

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