My brain cells are circular stencils of different instances that keep swirling when I stand still
My pain cell that I’m caged in is appearing under the dark light on a rice sheet as I pencil
The visual of this projected engraving is caved in when I drone me to sea my senses
This heavy feeling is laminated under the thin film with cold heat of the sensitive relations
My blood streams very slowly when the noisy surroundings cross ways to wrong me
This reality is so astounding & extraordinary when I reel it on my mind screen
The balance is swinging on thin time string as my heart speaks with silent beats
My words leave the branches as the red leaves coz it’s the fall season of this lone tree
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Your poetry is the best, Navin. I sure am glad you share it with us.
You’re very kind, Tara…I’m honoured…my gratitude to you ✨🙏💫💟
*applause!*
Thank you very much, David ✨
Amazing piece, Navin. Love it.💕👏👏👏💕
Thank you very much, dear Grace ✨💟💫
My pleasure, Navin.💕
Beautifully penned, my friend 👏👏
Oh Navin…this poem is like a 10 course dinner into you:) Each line, thought, although flowing together, is a separate insight into your wild and wonderful mind! I love how you stencil your inner imagery and the very last line is just killer (so good) “My words leave the branches as the red leaves coz it’s the fall season of this lone tree” Yes and in your case and your amazing writing..Fall….can come at any minute… Loved it my poetic friend!
Oh wow, you’ve just made my poetry extra beautiful…through the power of your words…through your reflection…through your love & ability to see me through my lines….my gratitude to you, dearest Karima…I’m kinda speechless ✨❤️✨
What an exceptional poem my dearest Navin.
xoxo
My gratitude to you, dearest Gabriela 💫🙏✨
Wonderfully powerful, and beautiful, dearest Navin. ✨🌹❤️
Thank you very much, dearest Jeff ✨🙏💫❤️
This is an incredible piece dear Navin!💞
Thank you very much, dear Cindy…I’m glad you liked my poem 🙏✨💟💫
It’s my pleasure Navin!
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A beautifully crafted piece 👌💐
Thank you very much, KK ✨🙏💫
You’re welcome always 😊