The drops in veins
Are the thoughts insane
The talk in vain
Is to prompt the phase
The song I sang
I drop the face
The sign that rays
The darkest day
It’s time to race
And write the date
To account the rate
Of the countless deaths
Of the tiny cells
That reside in shades
Of the mindless brain
The doubts are bad
Are like dots embedded
On a darker shed
That’s propped with paints
But honestly
It’s to pop the pain
On a block with pen
So I strike the pins
To disembark the bane
I rock the string
To shock the wave
And I shot the blame
To fog a name
That’s bothering
The inside of me
The sky is red
And the ground is rain
I lost the track
So I walk the lane
To find the peace
I define the pace
I blind the drapes
To light the sense
I side the rage
To sight the sage
I spine the strength
To eye the main
I fine the thread
And dissolve the ends
To embroid the change
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The sky is red And the ground is rain
I lost the track So I walk the lane
To find the peace I define the pace
My favourite lines Navin… ❤️❤️
Happy week ahead 🤝
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Thank you very much, Preeths….I’m glad you liked them….you have a wonderful week ahead 😊✨❤️
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The last line, “To embroid the change”, is a powerful ending for the narrator!
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You got it, Linda….the essence….
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So good. Brilliant verse, Navin. Bravo 👏
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Thank you Yassy….much appreciated 🙏✨
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My pleasure, Navin.
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There is nothing mindless in this, Navin. 💙 The highlighted deviation poses a second interesting narrative. 🌩🎶🌪✨
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Thank you for your heartfelt words, Blue….your support has always been amazing 🙏💙
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Always a pleasure. 💙💫
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Fantastic piece!!!
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Thanks Akshita!!!
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The sign that rays
The darkest day
It’s time to race
And write the date ❤️❤️🌈🌈
Beautiful 😍❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you, dear Astha ✨❤️
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Lovely writing, Navin! 😁💐
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Thank you very much 😊✨
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Fantastic piece. It will stay with me.
Sending love.
xoxo
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Thank you very much, Gabriela….that’s kind of you….
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My pleasure 🥰🌹🌸
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✨❤️
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Absolutely fantastic. Bravo!
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Thank you, Ishita!
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Superbly evoked
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Thank you very much 🙏
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You’re welcome
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Wonderfully penned!
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I’m glad you liked my poem….
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love the repetitions. . .
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Thank you very much, Jay….
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Beautifully penned, Navin.. 🌹🌹🙏
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Thank you very much, Diana 🙏 ✨❤️
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Beautiful poem
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Thank you very much….
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My pleasure 😊
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I like it, the cadence again.
I think I’ve written maybe three poems with a dance that feels good like this. There sure is something special writing/reading things that feel good to the mouth. Something you have a talent in 🙂
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“….feel good to the mouth” (& ears)….with a deeper meaning (at least to me)….yeah, perhaps….rhyming with rythm n cadence…this happen naturally to me….that’s how I see my poem before I ink it….Thank you for your wonderful words, EC ✨❤️
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Dear Navin,
This is so honest gutteral written in such great truth.
This was awesome and the end sewn together with hope!!!
Love this….
“I fine the thread
And dissolve the ends
To embroid the change”
💖
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Thank you very much for your heartfelt words, dear Cindy ❤️🙏
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You’re so welcome Navin!💖💖💖
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💙
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💙🙏
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Great piece.
So good. 🙂
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Thank you very much 💫
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Great blog you havee here
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Thank you very much, Emily ✨🙏💫
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