I’m unlocking my phone & checking my post every second minute
But no new mails anymore, there are only empty spaces
I’m feeling cold & my core is burning in agony beyond any limits
It’s still difficult to believe, how the things have ended in a split second
Energies were glowing like the beautiful stars, everything was smoking sacred
But memories are all that’s left behind, the feeling of being one is burning ashes
My eyes are fixed on a mirror, they look pretty dead & quite rigid
I’m seeing reflections of crystal green but that mirror is now cracking
I’m touching the cracks on its surface but it’s me that’s purely shattered into pieces
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Deep feeling and emotion felt in this poem, Navin. 🙏🏼💙
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I’m “glad” you felt it, Blue 💙 🙏
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The poem has an echo effect… like the feeling of when an experience becomes a memory.
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It’s quite true….it has become a memory 🖤
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🕊️💛
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Being shaken to the core and shatterend into pieces is so powerfully exhibited in your words and chills run down my spine when I hear them. Some of our best writing comes from these times. Nice job Navin! 💖
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Thank you very much for your heartfelt words, Cindy 🙏✨
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It is my pleasure Navin!💖💖💖
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The end 🥺💓
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Exactly 🖤
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As the new day arises we must carry on and be our best selves. For noone else but ourselves, we owe it to ourselves to grow. We feel pain and happiness. We r human. Nothing more, nothing less 🙏
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Wise words dearest Keza…I’m working on me….constantly 🙏🖤
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oooh shattered mirror and cold alone… some of my favorite images. Excellent piece Navin.
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I’m “glad” to know you liked my piece….Thanks Tara ✨
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Really a fan of your work, Navin. It speaks to me.
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Oh wow….thank you very much Tara….I’m speechless 🙏✨❤️
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This is painful to read. Every line pricks deep inside. 💔 This is an extraordinary writing. Loved the dark side of this poem. 🖤🖤
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Thanks dear Preeths….Dark shows me the light 🖤✨
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The end is the icing on the cake
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🙏🖤
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Those split second endings do shatter the soul. A powerful write Navin.
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Absolutely true….Thank you, Secrets ✨🙏
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A deep and soulful poem, Navin. ❤️❤️🙏💐
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Thank you very much, Diana 🙏 ❤️….my apologies for late reply….I found your comment in spam folder….the mystery of WP 🤨🧐
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No worries, Navin! Happens to me too❤️😊
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😊✨❤️
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Emotions displayed profoundly. In the split second so much happens with a human. Stunning write.
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True….but I believe everything happens for a reason….thank you for liking my writing, Kritika 🙏✨
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Indeed. Rightly said.
My pleasure always kindly 🙂
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The ending, it’s perfect.
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Thanks EC….yeah, that’s how it is sometimes 🖤
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Yes and a wonderful analogy
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✨❤️
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That last line got to me….
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Thank you very much for reading my poem….
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I like the imagery in the last stanza!
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Thank you Indira!
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Sounds like me. No new messages. LOL
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Haha….
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I loved the imagaination in this blog. SO vivid. Amazing take:)
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Thank you very much 🙏 ✨
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My pleasure😃
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Drying my eyes, covering my feet, and counting my blessings. Navin, another beautiful poem to flow…my flowic….not sure what storm happened but my world is still sitting in pieces….no answers have been given & feeling quite the pariah at times even & trying to stay steadfast on ‘healing’ but w/out others helping me fill in the time loss …I’m stuck stale-mated as I see changes around my town more than just being in the hospital 2 wks…..I will get caught up on your writings more….thank you for being so strong for me …the energy is more than appreciated and life refreshing…..Much love my flowic friend…
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Thank you very much, dear Kym….nice to see you back….give yourself time….baby steps….to find the peace & grounding….you know where to find me….much love
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“I’m touching the cracks on its surface but it’s me that’s purely shattered into pieces”
Amazing but emotional piece, Navin.
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Thank you very much 🙏…very much appreciated…
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You’re welcome, Navin.
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A beautiful and emotional piece! ✨
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Thank you very much….
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Nice poem. The image simply complements the thoughts.
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Thank you for liking my poem & appreciating the image ✨
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More of a dialogue than a poem
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A dialogue can also be poetic….depends on the perspective…thx for reading it.
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That’s true
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