Sometimes being a broken fool covered in scratches gifted by the edgy pool paints us to the hue of crazy good coz we then tend to zoom in to the wounds that we consciously start to sew with the pointed needle holding the lengthy loop of healing but it hurts when the eye of this I shaped tool pierces the raw surface which is bleeding the transparent blues but by doing so the holes in this dotted zone bring us sooner or later closer to the I times two which looks like the letter U of this magical Universe that we try to keep aligned inside with the heavy tunes of pure love
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Oooo so many great lines. I’m take by this ” we then tend to zoom in to the wounds”, because ain’t that the truth! And also Navin… That ending is π
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Oh, it is the truth & that’s how I was feeling at the time of writing this piece, Bree…thank you very much for your wonderful words, dear friend π
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Brilliant ink Navin ππ
Powerful lines my friend ππ
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Thank you very much, dear Maggie β¨ππ«
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Always a pleasure to read your work Navin π₯°πΉβ€οΈ
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Wow Navin, I totally vibrated to this one and maybe my favorite is
” gifted by the edgy pool paints us to the hue of crazy good” All of it is a deep look and wounds, healing and in the end only love lessens the scars. Really wonderful writing in your indomitable and unique, hard to miss, style my friend! Bravo!!
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I’m always amazed by your reflection…the way you read & sense my lines…this is no exception…you connect with the core…I’m honoured to read your beautiful words…n I always feel happy…you see me well…thank you very much, my dear friend – Karima β¨β€οΈπ«
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I love being able to see you my friend..I will never tire of that:) Thank you for this beautiful reply.
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