I’m so twisted when I lay down in my pit
When things grow crazy, I shed my deadly skin
I look so drop dead when I wear this new suit of scales
My hissssing eyes are wide open while you look at me in fear
Don’t gaze at me with that glare, you’re just making me insane
Just pray for your life coz you’re about to be my next prey
You simply can’t escape when I follow your shaky steps
Don’t look back at me in despair while I sway my swag
My moves are so swift when I zig-zag & spit at you in air
I’ll show you the blues when I bite you, I swear
Everything will change in that moment to the living hell
I’ll give you fits before you finally lie on your ground plain dead
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27 thoughts on “My Hissssing Eye”
I felt like a snake is talking to me. This an amazing poem.
Thanks a lot dear Kritika….I’m glad you felt my words.
That’s a wonderful post!
I’m glad you liked it 😊
A third eye view in control or maybe not. 🙂🦋
Perhaps….animal (/raw) is ON in me ✨
Wow Navin I didn’t know you were dangerous. now I should be scared! B)
Haha….My Hissssing Eye won’t be “activated” when it comes to you, Blue 😉
Good to know. At least you come with a warning – I can appreciate that 😉
😉…damn it Bleu got auto-incorrected to Blue…my bad
Oh ya it does that to me alllll the time!
Wow, just wow! I truly love the way that you write, the imagery in this poem is insane. Depicted well by the image of a snake, but equally applicable to human emotions 🌷
Thanks Hannah. Your lovely words mean a lot to me 😊🌹
No, thank you for sharing, I enjoyed reading it! The pleasure is mine 🌷
You’ve just made my day brighter✨🌹
I’m glad I could do that for you! Keep smiling and producing works of art 🦋
Thanks dear. You too keep writing beautiful lines, right from your heart.
Loved this piece.
It’s so unique.
Thank you kindly.
Well, my dear Navin, I will choose to believe that during that rage I will attempt to calm that storm that comes towards me and I WILL succeed…
That sounds so great….if you can calm the untame….
If I cannot then I shall be the untamed with you…merging with the rage..fire, until it dissipates…