Reflection of A-Mirror

Original poetry

You’ve left behind a permanent mark in my whole
I know it’ll always remain smoking sacred & pure
I hope you can see the light in your crystal clear core

You’re more than A-mirror, a magical reflection of the highest source
You’re the breathtaking sparkling waterfall that freely flows
You’re the crystal green, the beautiful light that intensely glows

You see, this body suit is just an appearance, a closed piece of cloth
And love is much more bigger than the feeling of “mi amor”
This life is the meditative voyage on waves of the highs & the lows

The only way you would know that my body is ashes in the human form
Is when I’ll disappear from the pages just like the mysterious black hole
No footprints of mine you’ll ever find, coz I’m the fine sand on the shore

I’m understanding the meaning of pure touch that I once craved for
My gratitude to you for being with me from the other side of this globe
The Universe is echoing “It’s You”, just say no more beautiful soul

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22 thoughts on “Reflection of A-Mirror”

  1. Brilliant piece< Navin. These lines truly sang to me. I absolutely love it, my friend. You are amazing.💕💕
    "You see, this body suit is just an appearance, a closed piece of cloth
    And love is much more bigger than the feeling of “mi amor”
    This life is the meditative voyage on waves of the highs & the lows"

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  3. Straight from your heart and soul as always, Navin….flowing lines and thoughts and memories that live as part of you. When one experiences a Big love in their life, they will carry that love like a light inside of them; it becomes part of them., inseparable…if some day, the body suit (what I call the atomic avatar) turns to ashes, this love continues with your soul’s journey. This is a poetic description of the transformative true love, that will be with you forever.
    Your description of this love….is breathtaking. Bravo my friend for finding the words… they are just the right ones❤️

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    1. Oh wow, l’m delighted to read your beautiful & transparent words…true, love will be with me forever.…my gratitude to you for your heart touching words & kindness, Karima 🙏✨❤️💫

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  4. What a gorgeous piece, dearest Navin. The awareness about the projected life and the reality that lives in the unseen is profound in your verse. It’s gorgeous and enlightening. ❤️🌹🌸✨🥰🙏

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  5. ” smoking sacred & pure” – this is pure stunning choice of words.
    “love is much more bigger than the feeling of “mi amor”
    This life is the meditative voyage on waves of the highs & the lows” – this is glimpse is afforded to the one who is touched to the core of their soul and then allowed to return to surface. I am overwhelmed with appreciation for how present you are to the momemt to moment flow of life from inside out, through and through. I happen to understand what it takes for that to happen.

    PS – I have your book now and what a treasure to hold in my hand, as I read page after page. I will say more – later after I finish it. I will still say this – I was overcome with delight with resonance for how poetry came to me – unannounced and broke me open, one by one, or perhaps sealed me back, one by one, depends how we look at it. I remember my phase when the poems came surging, and when I mourned through more poetry when they trickled down – I recognize all those themes and spaces from where they come – you do it absolutely amazingly. Now let me stop, and say more only after I finish reading your book – I am going slow deliberately.

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    1. I love your lines…”this is glimpse is afforded to the one who is touched to the core of their soul and then allowed to return to surface”…I can sense from your words that you do understand what it takes for that to happen…thank you very much, Pragalbha…

      Oh wow, you’ve bought my book…I’m honoured & my eyes are shining…it’s a great moment for me…a blessing…this is the exact description of how poetry came to me…unannounced…broke me open or sealed me back…I’m borrowing your words coz they’re perfect…I had never written a word of my own in my life…”Speechless I Became” (my first poem) was strongly flowing in me & I felt for the very first time to pen it down…I’m glad you are able to recognize themes n spaces, from where they come…my gratitude to you for your wonderful & heartfelt words…can you see how much I can write when I’m speechless deep within & in tears?…this means a lot to me, Pragalbha 🙏✨💟💫

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      1. I am taking moments of silence in this shared space of deep speechlessness. It is such grace to land at this shared recognition of the Fullness of Nothingness that moves within into a stillness. Can you see how poetry is emerging this moment …

        I was stunned at the title of your first poem, and that became the greatest confirmation to me, of the resonance. “Speechless I Became” . The word Speechless is very special to me. I would like to take the liberty to share a link of a poem of mine that had stunned me with its emergence – can you spot that word tucked in it? It had come from unknown depths within that were still shocking to me. I eagerly await your reading of it:

        While on your true path …

        One more thing to say – When I held your book in my hand, I felt a great contentment for the gift of your poetry being out in the world – all that I would offer, you have offered with such unique and incredible beauty. So grateful to have your book!!! It inspires me to do the same with my poetry, whenever it is meant to be. Until then and forever after Lightening Rhymes is my gift to hold.
        (I will share your book with my review, after I feel complete with it)

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      2. “It is such grace to land at this shared recognition of the Fullness of Nothingness that moves within into a stillness”…I eye The Divine in your fine line…I’m awestruck…coz your words are freely flowing with pure beauty & your wisdom….poetry is emerging this moment…an extraordinary poetry I would say…do know that I’m sitting in silence this moment…gazing at your lines…they’re fluid & multidimensional…

        The word Speechless is very special to me as well…synchronicity…thank you very much for sharing “While on your true path …”…”Speechless words”…Speechless is the word, I believe…one really needs to understand what speechless words mean…it sounds quite simple but the depth is deeper than the deepest ocean…

        You honour me by writing such wonderful lines that I truly get lost in the shine of every single word you sprinkle on this canvas…I’m blessed that you’re enjoying my poetry collection…I’m delighted & humbled that Lightning Rhymes is inspiring you to do the same with your own poetry book…give yourself the time it takes to publish your own book…there’s no rush but do remember to enjoy the journey from having the idea of publishing your book till the very end when it is finally out there…it would be a gift from you to this Universe…I’ll be very much honoured whenever you’ll be sharing review of my book…my utmost gratitude to you, Pragalbha…heart is shining, eyes are smiling, soul is singing & body is dancing…this is what joy is… Thank you so very much for your magical words, dear Pragalbha ✨🙏💫💟🌟

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      3. Such Ripples of Joy pulsating through the spaces of my being, a smile on me that …this smile on me, felt ever so deeply …

        “sitting in silence this moment…gazing at your lines…they’re fluid & multidimensional…” – this moment is exactly same for me …

        I am finally fulfilled with knowing that “speechless words” is fully understood in ways that I truly mean, those words came to me as pure magic, I get to experience that space yet again this moment – it is a rare glory of life, I know you get this.

        I am luxuriating in the deepest peace and pause in the middle of the day – feeling the blessings, the grace and the joy – the silence is exquisite. Humbled. Bowing with Gratitude. Smile 🙂

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      4. Such sparkling words…I’m simply going to enjoy & embrace this beautiful moment…The aftereffect…My gratitude 💫

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