The heart is eyeing my phase while I am crying
The air in my body is heavy the way I am sighing
The mind of mine is red diamond when I am mining
The fire is burning my track that I trace on thin icing
The demons are scratching my face while they’re dancing
My feet are loosing the balance, so I’m simply sliding
Time is chasing the zones that once were hiding
The walls of this form are cracking & now they’re falling
I’m unchaining my case that was suppressing the deeper calling
My voice is whispering to burning stars as they keep shining
The soul is grounding my whole in soil as if I am dying
This all is enlightening the core, it’s so exciting
Dear readers,
After Reliving, I took a time off from WP….and now I’m coming back slowly….I’ve certainly missed you & your lovely writings / art….I will try to catch up but if I can’t, then a new day & a new beginning. Here’s my new poem / spoken word – Eyeing my Phase.
Welcome back. Phases to a clearer vision. I love the last verse. 💙🙏🏼😊💫
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Thank you, Blue….I’m glad the last verse spoke to you 🙏💙✨
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You’re most welcome. 😊💫
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Wow Navin, this piece is outstanding. It’s so beautiful, I’m lost for words! That last stanza is especially magical, brought so many different emotions! The love, vulnerability and courage here is so inspiring and graceful. My heart went on many adventures while reading this amazing piece, it’s truly stunning! I’m blown away; I read it so many times…it’s just that spectacular. Thank you for this masterpiece, my dear friend! Much love, always 🤗🖤🤍
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My gratitude to you, dear Ace….I was and am on an adventure….living by being true to myself….the highs & the lows are the important part of this adventure….your heartfelt words speak ocean to me….keep shining & enlightening 🙏✨❤️
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That’s a fantastic piece, dear Navin. I adore the imagery you create, and that last line is powerfully elegant. Lovely, my friend. ❤️
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Thank you very much for your kind words, dear Jeff….I’m so glad, we’ve connected here 🙏❤️✨
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You’re most welcome, my friend. Ah, yes, I am glad we connected as well, Navin. A wonderful connection. ❤️🙏✨
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💫❤️✨
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An engrossing poem Navin, and I particularly liked the final 2 stanzas ..
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That means a lot to me, Ivor…thank you very much ✨
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My pleasure
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The last stanza was brilliant!! Enjoyed reading this
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Thank you dear Akshita….I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙏✨
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Welcome back. I felt the pain throughout, and I liked how the flawless finish. 👏👏Well done dear Navin ❤️❤️
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Thank you dear Preeths….there’s pain but there’s also learning & opening up….such experiences teach me things at a whole different wavelength….much love ❤️ ✨
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Powerful words ❤️❤️
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Thanks Ashish ❤️✨
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Most welcome 🙂
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Loved to read your poems, stay connected !
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I’m glad to know, Dakshali….thank you!
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😊💓
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I’m glad you’re back Navin. 💖
Lots of emotions evoked in your poetry.
The power of this last line reminded me that we are all dying a little everyday and we are opening to what is and a new beginning which truly is exciting.
“My voice is whispering to burning stars as they keep shining
The soul is grounding my whole in soil as if I am dying
This all is enlightening the core, it’s so exciting” ❤️🌷
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Absolutely true, dear Cindy….we are all dying a little everyday….to relive from the deep ❤️🙏✨
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Soooo true and we never know what the day will bring. Hope today brings you sunshine and smiles. Big hugs and love Navin🤗💖🌈
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Beautifully said….have a lovely weekend….much love ❤️ ✨
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Thanks Friend.. will do and you as well❣️💖
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Thank you dear Cindy ❤️
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You’re welcome Dear💖
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Definitely wonderful cadence here.
Missed you ❤️
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Thank you, dear EC….I’m grateful that you pick up on my cadence….it happens naturally as if I sense the words & their presence…And I missed you as well ❤️ ✨
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What a gorgeous piece and what a beautiful recitation. Listening to your voice is a treat.
xoxoxo
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You’ve always been sweet, kind & supportive….thank you very much, dear Gabriela fit liking my lines & recitation 🙏✨❤️
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I love your poems and your recitations 🌹
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🙏❤️
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Love this piece, dear Navin. An emotional piece for sure. Stay blessed always ❤️🙏🌻🤗
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Thank you very much dear Diana ❤️ ✨ 🙏
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Glad to see you around again and it’s great to read this marvel from your sublime quill…✍
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Thank you very much for your kind words ✨🙏
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You are most welcome ❤🌺❤
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Yeppiiiii this is exciting. Welcome back. Breaks are good for health. Hope you rested well.
‘I’m unchaining my case that was suppressing the deeper calling’ uplifting. Glad to read your work. Happy Blogging!
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Thank you dear Kritika….uplifting words from you….I very much appreciate it 😊✨
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Welcome 🙂 🙂
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I appreciate that the poem talks about the human experience, such as the demons dancing… and ends with a higher perspective ❤ It embodies an entire experience 🙂
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I’m glad you could see where it started & where it ended….to s newer begining….thank you very much, for your beautiful words, Linda 🙏💫❤️✨
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Haha… to a newer beginning! Love that. No problem, Navin. I’m glad to! 🙂
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I’m glad you understood my reply….full of typos 🤦♂️😊❤️✨
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Hahaha of course my friend 🙂
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This was such a beautiful poem! Loved it! ♥♥
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I’m glad to read that…that’s kind of you…thank you very much💖✨
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If I could sum up how I feel. This poem would be it ❤
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Oh wow….that’s a huge compliment….I’m humbled….thank you so very much 🙏 ❤️ ✨
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🙂
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Love the way you play with your words 😍
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Thank you very much 🙏 ❤️ ✨
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