It’s been raining heavily every single day & night
I’m breathing ashes, the air is exploding flaming dynamite
The universe seems pitch dark, there’s no sign of intense light
I’m drowning in deep sorrow, pain is what I feel & write
I’m sitting still in shock, surrounded by speechless noise
My body is covered in layers but my state is frozen to cubicle ice
My heart is beating with crazy screams of my saddened voice
I don’t know what else to do when all I do is to simply cry
My big brown eyes were once shining with beautiful green crystals so divine
Now they’re soaked in sparkling tears, red eyes are all left behind
I dreamt, I could fly high with my broken wings in beautiful blue skies
But my feet are sinking slowly on heavy ground every moment that passes by
I’m trying hard to accept & breathe without the painful sighs of life
The knife is stuck in the I & it won’t let me live, it won’t let me die
So I close my eyes to sense the deep emotions that are suffocating my mind
But then I cry even more coz it feels as if I’m witnessing my own demise
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Quite lovely ❤️
Sometimes we express all we have in these pain infused glimpses. One thing I’ve learned is it’s either a calming for my mind and heart or someone else’s.
Wonderful job
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I’m glad you liked my poem….thanks for sharing your learning ✨❤️
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Eventually the rains subside, the grey parts and light shines. It is the “I” that allows the tears to lessen what ails the mind and heart. Hugs my friend 🙏🏼💙
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Yeah….eventually….thank you all the way for your kind words & support, Blue….Hugs to you as well ✨💙
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Ohhh Navin… this is so heartbreaking and lovely all at once. I could feel every line.
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Thanks Tara….I’m “glas” you could feel every like….
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You take my breath away. You break my heart. You heal it. You are great.
Sending you big hugs.
xoxo
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Thank you very much for your wonderful words, dear G. Much love ✨❤️
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My pleasure. Have a solenoid weekend 🌹🥰🌹
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Thank you….have a peaceful weekend ✨❤️
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🌹❤️🥰
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Den enorme smerte udtrykkes smerteligt her. Åh kære Navin, jeg ønsker at du snart kan komme ud af dette og lade de brudte stykker blive ordnet. Meget kærlighed til dig ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Ps: Used GT, as am not a pro as you know. 😄😄
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Tusind tak for din søde ord kære P….Kærlig hilsen ❤️✨….
PS: I was also thinking now you’re writing crazy long sentences in a go….I’m glad you’re trying 😊✨
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The beauty of your light shines even when you write words of pain. I hope you are taking care of yourself. ❤
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Thanks for your kind words, Linda….I’m doing alright ❤️
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Yay! 🙂
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Painful description of the state of the human.
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Indeed ✨
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This so heartbreaking and beautiful. Your metaphors are just absolutely stunning🖤
“I’m breathing ashes, the air is exploding flaming dynamite.” This is frighteningly expressive.
And the second stanza was absolutely spectacular!
Please take care dear friend❤🙏
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Thanks for your lovely words, Ishita….You stay safe ❤️✨
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My pleasure Navin💕
I will, thanks!🖤
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U have beautifully captured the uneasy feeling of cruel disparity. For after the rain does stop the sun will shine yet once again 🌻
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Thank you very much for your kind & heartfelt words, dearest Keza….rain is stopping gradually….weather would change….thanks for your lovely support ✨❤️🙏
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Sometimes u must wear plastic bags inside ur boots for protection 😉
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Good idea….thx for suggestion 😉😊
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Beautiful poem on feeling pain, I loved the flow of your words, Navin. Stay blessed ❤️🙏
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Thank you very much, Diana 🙏✨❤️
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Such a beautiful and touching piece, Navin.
I wish you well, my friend.
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Thank you very much….I wish you a peaceful day 🙏 ✨
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You’re welcome, Navin.
You too. Have a peaceful day.
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I’m speechless at both your poem and execution of emotions and feelings expressed so vividly and powerful. Really incredibly delivered Dearest Navin and I trust that no matter how deep you sink you will fly to those beautiful blue skies with your gorgeous brown eyes. Sending you a big hug and lots of love through the ethers. 💖❤️🌷🤗🤗🌈🌈🌈🌈
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Thank you very much for your kind & heartfelt words….I’m humbled beyond words….much love, dearest Cindy 🙏❤️✨
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You are soooo welcome, it was an honor to share with you! That makes my heart happy and I hope you let it sink in and know how loved you are. Thanks for the love as I start my morning! love and hugs back! ❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🌷🌷
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I’m literally speechless after reading your heartfelt words🙏😊❤️✨💫
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awwwwwwww…. 💖💖💖love richocheting to you NOW. did you feel it? 💖💖💖🙏🙏🙏
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I did 🙏❤️✨
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💖❤️😘🙏
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You’re sooooooo welcome Dearest Navin and thanks for entrusting your heart and soul to our W.P. family and thanks for being part of mine.
❤️🙏
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Much love 🙏❤️
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THANKS 1🙏🌷
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I am… speechless. I felt this to my bones. Wow. You are exceptional.
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Thank you very much for your heartfelt words….Very much appreciated ✨
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