Stuck in the deep
Deeply sad times
Time is running so fast
Faster than thoughts in the head
Heading to hit the wall in full speed
Speedy recovery is what we say
Saying things will be alright
All are shaken to the core
Core is losing the hope
Hoping for the best
Gates chained
Chasing the lanes
Raising the dams
Damning the senses
Facing the phases
Crawling like ants
Breathless no air
Shouting for help
Praying like insane
Catastrophe we live
Failing to play
Falling like preys
Reds in the rain
Blaming the heaven
Firing the flames
Burning the deads
Ashes are left
Smoke prevails
Soul lives
Energy is left
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absolutely stunning my flowic friend!!
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Thank you my dear friend 🙏❤️
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Superbly evoked poetry!
Very well done!
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Thank you!
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It’s a pleasure always
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This is so stunningly beautiful, my friend!! It’s deep, raw and has such an effortless flow. Your words carry such power! Amazingly done, I absolutely love this 🖤🤗
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Thank you very much, Ace…Btw, I’ve printed your 12 pages book 🙏✨
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Of course! And yay!!! I’m so glad to hear that, can’t wait to hear your thoughts!!! 🖤
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❤️✨
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I love love love how magnificent this is ✨🥺
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Thank you very much, Rishika 🙏✨
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😊✨
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The pain is so transparent here,I could feel the emotions!! But I love the positivity at the end, soul lives with energy left!!! It’s more important that the soul lives no matter what. Beautiful and poignant 💔 Great post again. 🤗🤗
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Dear Preeths, thanks a lot for your beautiful words….I very much appreciate them ✨❤️
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So raw and deep!
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Thank you Akshita!
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Oh man. Absolutely love this one. The power and the momentum is unstoppable.
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Thank you for your heartfelt words….you’re always there with your support, Tara 🙏✨
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Yes, and you always create the best work.
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You’re really sweet n kind 🙏
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You are one of the truly deep writers Navin 👏
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Very true.
Great piece, Navin. ❤
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Thank you very much 🙏 ❤️
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You’re welcome. ❤
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That’s very kind of you, Bree…thank you if you think so ✨🙏
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Brilliantly written Navin 👌👌
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Thank you dear Navin ✨
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Powerfully penned, Navin.
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Thank you very much, Linda ✨
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✨✨
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I read it in one breath Navin. Spectacular.
xoxoxo…
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Thank you very much dear Gabriela 🙏✨
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My pleasure Navin. Have a wonderful day 🌸🌹🤗
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Thank you very much & you too have a wonderful day ✨❤️
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🙏🤗
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An amazing, powerful write, Navin. I love the emotions coming out of this! Well done. 🌻🤗🌺❤️
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Thank you very much for your lovely words, dear Diana….very much appreciated 🤗🙏❤️✨
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Wonderful work Navin!
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Thank you very much, Monica!
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wow what a flow…I felt as if you were running from some emotions.
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Thank you Raghavasree….I think, I was running from an emotion into another emotion….
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My pleasure.. Hope you hop on to a more happier emotion soon
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Let’s see 😉✨
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🙂
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Once again your imagery is outstanding!! Amazing work ❤️
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That’s kind of you….thank you very much ❤️
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The current situation we are in. ‘Stuck’ exactly. Sadly hope is in question from every direction. The flow is awesome. Wonderful articulation.
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Absolutely….stuck at present….that’s what I felt (& still feel) & then the words started flowing in me….thank you for your heartfelt words, Kritika ✨ ❤️
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I get you. My pleasure always kindly 🙂 (Heart)
Stay Safe!
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wow Navin what a powerful cresendo that continued to build and kept my heart racing until the end. Great job dear!💖👏👏👏
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Thank you very much for your heartfelt words….I’m speechless, Cindy 🙏❤️✨
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You’re so welcome❣️
That’s a great compliment to your poetry❣️
Speechless! ❣️❤️
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🙏❤️
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💖🙏
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