It’s simply automatic & kinda symptomatic when I’m out to see the unsystematic flow of this inner darkness when I layer myself with the transparent sheet that looks quite fantastic coz it’s ornamented with the fragments of my provocative thoughts
But the sword on my claustrophobic plot is dancing so hot as if it’s about to sore & cut open my throat to penetrate the screaming walls of my cracked fort that in reality can’t even afford the heavy blows coz then it throws the red pearls out to the shore to shut down the light of my burning core
This whole coat the unseen holes on my shaky course with the pragmatic approach to integrate the scorching arithmetic quotes by simply torching floors filled with scouting horrors with the glow of a rhythmic unknown to simply show the unmatched power of the so called smoking soul
But then this cinematic scene explodes & I freely fall on this ecstatic floor where I start transcribing my countless flaws with my crazy traumatic claws into the poetic form where I take an accelerated pause to finally get lost in the edges of my sleepless jaws to wait for another daunting but quite exotic dawn
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34 thoughts on “A poem – Automatic”
Intense write my friend 👍🏻
Thank you mate ✨
This reads as if
One cannot quit take a deep enough breath to fill the lungs, a moment of frenzied panic. The mind takes back control and there is a calm. This is indeed intense. 🙏🏼💙
Thank you, Blue….it’s exactly how I was feeling when I wrote this piece….I was seeing vivid imagery on my screen 💙✨🙏
Intense and deep
Thank you very much, Akshita
There’s a dark rhythmic dance in this that sways to a slower beat at the end
It’s amazing how you capture the whole picture in a line, Linda…thank you very much 🙏 ❤️
Like I said on IG…. Bang bang!!! 😎😎😎. AWESOME, Navin. Feelings are everything… ❤️👌💫🙏😍🤗
I like bang bang emotions….thank thank….kind being ❤️🙏✨
Amazing and intense as ever🥺💛💛
Thank you very much Rishika ✨
The pleasure’s mine 😊✨
Wow Navin… chilling, intense, suspenseful and blows me away.
Thank you very much, dear Cindy 🙏 ❤️
It’s my pleasure Navin! You’re up late yes?
You’re always so kind….it’s only 11:07 pm….moreover I’m in owl 😎
lol.. not sure why I thought it was like 2 a.m. there.
Owl on friend.. xo
No worries…..it happens sometimes 😉
Intense and deep. I love how you wrote this. The vocabulary on point.. Keep blogging 😊
Thank you very much for your words, Raghavasree….I really appreciate it 😊✨
Passionate… powerful. Exceptional poetry.
Thank you very much Gabriela ✨….
Absolutely captivating…entrancing weave of enchanting musings
Thank you very much….I’m glad you liked my writing ✨
You are most welcome
I always enjoy your work
Thank you once again….I enjoy yours ✨
so sorry you went thru this — but there’s hope in seeking an outlet through writing 🙂
There’s always hope…thanks for reading & commenting 🙏✨