It’s dark outside right now in the scene of cold winter
The heat is on but my longing for you makes me to shiver
So I hold a corner of my pillow as if you’re with me under the layer
And I kiss your lips passionately & then whisper that I very much love you
I’m burning my senses in your fire, you’re simply so irresistible
I’m digging my ground deeper, you’re the depth unreachable
I’m filling my page with your essence, you’re the line of my every verse
I’m seeing beyond my deep scars, you’re the light of my universe
My face is glowing with your aura when I look into the mirror
My eyes are sparkling with your crystals, it’s pure love that I river
My heart is beating with pure joy, your healing is simply magical
You’re the smoke of my soul, you look quite hot & so spiritual
If you liked this post please like, comment here and follow Navin’s poetry on social media if you wish to.
© 2021 Navin’s Poetry. All rights reserved.
For more information, I encourage you to check the Home and About me pages.
Wow those words hold much passion, desire and want. Beautifully written. 😊💙🙏🏼💫
Thank you for your lovely words, Blue 🙏💙✨
Always my pleasure to read them, Navin. 😊🦋
Thank you Blue….and thank you for your amazing support 💫
Wow Navin… This is deeply, romantically and sweetly beautiful. Such heartfelt words of love and purity. Each line is captivating. You have captured our heart’s and souls with these amazing words of passion and intense special love. You have expressed your feelings in profoundly beautiful way. I hope this love of yours isn’t so I unreachable.
“The heat is on but my longing for you makes me to shiver
I’m seeing beyond my deep scars, you’re the light of my universe” These lines in particular are perfect. Although the entire piece is perfect. How heartwarming & magical ❤️😊🌹
Oh wow, my gratitude all the way for your heartfelt words….they mean a lot to me….not only I’m deeply touched but I also am humbled….I’m delighted that you liked my poem….nothing is unreachable when it’s pure….that’s what I believe in & that’s how I feel ❤️✨
So welcome…. Thanks for sharing 😊❤️🌹
Awww… This is spectacular! 👏👏👏👏 Could feel the emotions when I read it ❣️ A beautiful piece Navin. Keep up the great work
Thank you very much….you’re too kind….I’m glad you could feel the emotions….😊✨
A gorgeous poem Navin, and i especially like the 2nd stanza..
Thank you very much, dear Ivor….I’m delighted you liked my poem 😊✨
The crystal love is back!
Absolutely ! ✨
So beautiful! My favorites are when you post the whole thing like this, all at once. Such a pleasure reading your work.
Thank you very much, Tara….Of course, I understand the whole poem has a different effect than only a line….But I do so when I sense strongly that particular line in my heart….it becomes almost necessary for me to share it 😊✨
Oh yes, of course… but I just love when it’s altogether! 💕
I’m very delighted that you love my poetry….that’s a big compliment 🙏😊💙
“My face is glowing with your aura when I look into the mirror
My eyes are sparkling with your crystals, it’s pure love that I river
My heart is beating with pure joy, your healing is simply magical
You’re the smoke of my soul, you look quite hot & so spiritual”
The poem is unbelievable. It’s a river that flow from the soul of one who loves. It’s silk, and .. it’s purity indeed.
Sending you roses and plenty of love.
xoxo
Thank you very much for your kind words, Gabriela….beautifully expressed the purity of love….have a wonderful day full of light ✨
My pleasure Navin 🌹
You’re always there with your kind support….I’m humbled 🙏🌷
You are a great post. It’s easy to support you 😊 Enjoy the rest of your weekend 🌸
Thank you very much from me to a world class poet 🙏😊✨💫
You are too sweet 😊
😊✨
This is so lovely…. really. Absolutely beautiful <3
Thank you Val….I’m glad you liked my poem 😊 ✨
“The heat is on but my longing for you makes me to shiver”.
This is so romantic. 😊
This piece is beautiful, and I love the title. Your poems are always a delight, Navin. ❤
Thank you very much that you liked my poem…..your words mean a lot to me & thank you for your support 😊✨
My pleasure. 🙂
Very intense and beautiful…nice poetry here..
Thank you very much, Piyush….
Intense, deep passionate longing for love !
It’s truly….thank you very much for your comment, Deeksha ✨
Sooo beautiful ❤️❤️ absolutely amazing 💖
Thank you very much Astha 😊✨
On fire poetry. Awesome read.
Thank you very much, Kritika ✨
Welcome 🙂
“कड़ाके की ठंड के बीच अभी बाहर अंधेरा है
आप के लिए मेरी लालसा मुझे वहाँ में ले जाती है
इसलिए मैं अपने तकिए के एक कोने को पकड़ता हूंँ जैसे कि आप मेरे साथ हैं
और मैं अपने होंठों से पूरी भावना के साथ चुंबन करता हूँ। सब ओर कानाफूसी है कि मैं आपसे बहुत ज्यादा प्यार करता हूँ
मैं आपके प्रेम की आग में अपने होशो हवास जला रहा हूं, आपकी नाराज़गी ही दूर नहीं होती
मैंने अपने दिल को गहरा कर लिया है और एक आप हैं जो गहराई तक पहुंच नहीं पा रहे हैं
मैं आपके निचोड़ से पृष्ठ भर रहा हूं, आप मेरी लिखी हर कविता की पंक्ति हैं
मैं अपने गहरे निशान से परे देख रहा हूं, आप मेरे ब्रह्मांड की रोशनी हैं
जब मैं दर्पण में देखता हूं तो मेरा चेहरा आपकी आभा से दमक उठता है
मेरी आंखें आपके क्रिस्टल से चमक रही हैं, यह पवित्र प्रेम है जैसे कि मैं नदी हूं
मेरा दिल पावन आनंद से धड़क रहा है, आपका उपचार ही वो चमत्कार है
आप मेरी आत्मा का धुँआ हैं,
आप काफी गर्म और इतने आध्यात्मिक दिखते हैं… ”
वाह! क्या बात है नवीन जी 👏👏👏कविता के भाव प्रेमिल भी हैं और ईश्वरीय भी 💐
Thank you very much for your lovely comment & translation….although it’s not exact & some places it’s quite wrong….however it’s the essence that matters….which is absolutely to the point….so thank you 🙏😊🌷
Oh…. I have tried to read & understand… 😊👍But I couldn’t….
Oh, you were quite close….only a few lines were misunderstood….it’s simply very impressive that you used your precious time & put your effort on translating my poem….I appreciate it very much 😊🙏✨
Thanks Navin ji 😊👏👏👏👏
this piece of writing is too good !!!!
Thank you very much 🙂✨
This is so beautifully and poetically expressed Navin with such romantice and spiritual undertones that danced on the page while my mind wandered off to warm passion.
love this….”My face is glowing with your aura when I look into the mirror”
My eyes are sparkling with your crystals, it’s pure love that I riverLovely!!!
❤️❤️❤️
Cindy
Oh wow….I’m delighted to read that you liked my poem….thank you very much for your beautiful words….I’m humbled 🙏 ❤️ ✨
Oh it was just fabulous and I loved it!! ❤️❤️❤️👏😘
Thank you very much 🙏 ❤️ ✨
Wow.. beautiful n heartwarming! I started reading and writing poems recently and this one just made my day! Such a lovely piece 😍😊
Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, Tiya….I’m glad you liked my poem….✨😊
My pleasure 🥰
This is such a beautiful and passionate poem.. Loved the romantic touch and the emotions that you poured into this. Keep up the good work as always 🙂
Thank you very much for your kind words….you’re always there with your support 😊✨
My pleasure my friend🙂
Wow….that’s…….💚💚
It truly is 💫😊
My favorite line was, “I’m filling my page with your essence, you’re the line of my every verse”.
Wow… Beautiful!!!!
😊 thank you, Hal…I’m glad you liked my lines ✨
Beautiful👏🏻👏🏻🙌🏻❤️
Thank you 😊✨