Living in thoughts could be comfortable
Embracing the present seems unacceptable
Reality can be so unbelievable
Painbody is snapping me to unusual
Loving edges of perfect imperfections
Healing the soul is sole intention
Deep scars on my brutal blood surface
Arrows piercing in my broken top shelf
Bleeding river from my sensitive vessels
Crying ocean when I’m feeling restless
Feeling crazy when I skip the deep breaths
Unleashing devil when I’m manic anxious
Extinguishing sparks to calm the burning ashes
Expressing emotions to hit the freaking reset
Grinding patterns to feel the pure sand
Writing lines with my wondered senses
Lightning rhymes with my thunder pencil
Riding waves in search of peace & balance
—– Lightning Rhymes —–
Lightning Rhymes is a poem about the struggle to free myself from the sticky web of patterns & emotions. Sometimes I succeed & sometimes, I simply don’t. I’m learning every single moment to “deal” with me in order to find the inner peace. When the snapping snaps; when I loose my balance (psychological as well as physical), the whole ground shakes. It’s just not myself, who get affected.
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Please check these poems as well: Conjurer by PoeEternal (1), Parentheses and blinding light by Choices (2), My Hissssing Eye (3)
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Wow, beautifully expressed, Navin
Our constant struggle, to balance emotions and learning
Nice portrayal ๐๐
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Thanks Eraโจ…yeah, the balance is the pickle….my zodiac sign is though Libra ๐
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You’re most welcome ๐๐
Hehe, oh, okay ๐๐
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๐โจ
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Lovely! ๐๐๐
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Thank you! โค๏ธ โจ
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In these troubled time your words are quietly resonating, and you’ve captured me with theses 2 lines….
‘Crying ocean when Iโm feeling restless
Feeling crazy when I skip the deep breaths”
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I’m glad my rhyming lines got your attention ๐โจ
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Climbing the mountain of life with all its obstacles. Different for each of us as we r all all unique. Dont give up the fight my friend
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Beautiful words, Keza…..no, I don’t & won’t give up…..but I do get entangled in the patterns from time to timeโจ
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Lovely!๐คฉ๐คฉ
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Thank you! โจโจ
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Wow!! Beautifully articulated ๐๐
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Thank you, Dulcy โจ๐
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Stunning!
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Thanks Akshita!
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I love this! Very much the tight rope walk…
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Thanks a lot! And yeah….it feels pretty much like that…โจ
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Splendid! We need to strike the perfect balance, that’s the key.
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Absolutely….thank you very much for your lovely comment, Aashi โจ
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The power of your passions… the power of your words .. everything is incredible! The talent and the force that emanates from you… I am in love with this poem!
“Deep scars on my brutal blood surface
Arrows piercing in my broken top shelf
Bleeding river from my sensitive vessels
Crying ocean when Iโm feeling restless”
xoxoxo…
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Dearest Gabriela, what a beautiful and heartfelt comment from you. Thank you very much. I’m glad you could connect with this poem. Sending you love and hugs๐โจ
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My pleasure Navin. Everything is received. Sending you more love and hugs.
xoxo
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I’ve just received as well with the speed of light ๐
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๐น๐น๐น๐น
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Deep expressions of physical reaction on emotional level…..love these lines…. Loving edges of perfect imperfections
Healing the soul is sole intention. ๐๐ผ๐๐ฆ
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Thanks a lot Blue for your beautiful words & support all the way…๐๐โจ
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Youโre most welcome, Navin. ๐๐ฆ
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Intense.. emotions shimmering with strong words here…
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Oh yeah….I’m glad you could feel that…..
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it’s an uphill climb… meditate to maintain your peace and try to not overthink too much.
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Thanks Monica for your advice….much appreciated….thinking thoughts in itself could be over thinking sometimes….being mindful most of the day leads me to peace….though I do have the moments of imbalance, where my peace shreds into pieces….just like any other human being….especially after the bleeding in the brain….though I’m seriously trying to “incorporate” a few moments to meditate….that trying needs to be changed to doing….I know โจ
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Navin, this is stunning!! You are such a word wizard! Poetry seems to flow out of your soul so effortlessly โจ I loved the โbleeding river…. crying ocean…โ lines โฅ๏ธ and the ending, โRiding waves in search of peace & balance,โ wraps everything together exquisitely. Bravo!
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Such a praise from you, Katy….I’m honored….thank you very much โค๏ธโจ
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Your words resonant and send ripples of thought. It is definitely deep and your vocabulary is clearly on point. The perfect choice of words to the topic. โ๐๐
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Thank you very much for such a lovely comment. I’m glad you liked my poem โจ๐
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The pleasure is all mine. You made it worth the read
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I read it via Instagram. Have not been on WP much lately. Loved the line,” Lightning rhymes with thunder pencil.” Especially the thunder pencil.
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Thanks dear Kritika….I’m looking forward to read your new creation โจ
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Welcome always ๐
No idea when. Will try though. ๐
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Whenever the poem is ready to flow in you….I’m here to feel the stream โจ
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Thank you kindly ๐ท
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Wonderful expressions and brilliant words!
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Thanks a lot, Hemalatha โจ
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Lightening a white crack in the dark sky๐๐๐ป
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๐โจโค๏ธ
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This is exactly what it is ๐โจ
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Lovely!๐๐
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Thank you โจโค๏ธ
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Splendid !!
Writing lines with my wondered senses
Lightning rhymes with my thunder pencil
Riding waves in search of peace & balance
these lines be my favorite !!
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Thank you for your kind Words, Nima!! โจ
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Youโre welcome Navin !! ๐
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So deep and powerful! Amazing lines ๐
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Thanks a lot! โจ
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“Loving edges of perfect imperfections” this line really speaks to me… Have been reading it over and over! I’m a Libra too!! โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ
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I’m glad this line speaks to you, my libra friend โค๏ธโจ
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Feelings expressed in words so well ..!
Quite deep….!๐๐น
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Thanks a lot, Akshita โจ
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It was my pleasure reading ๐ โค
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โค๏ธ
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Nice poem!
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Thank you!
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Poignant piece!
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Thank you โจ
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“Lightning rhymes with my thunder pencil
Riding waves in search of peace & balance” โจโจ
Wow! I guess I should be back on WP (I’ve been very inactive XD) only to read these terrific lines!
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Thank you wholeheartedly for such a lovely comment, Sonia. That means a lot.
Yeah, I did notice that you’ve been away for quite a while….I checked your blog for new posts a couple of times….Hoping you’ll get some time to write your deep rhymes ๐โจ
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๐๐ You’re welcome!
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You are so gifted Navin โค
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Thank you โค๏ธ…a question – don’t you have a blog coz I can’t click to your name.
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That was an interesting read!
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Amazing poem… I totally love the style and expression. I am, too, familiar with these emotions, and every day, every moment, learning ways to “deal” with me.
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It feels “great” that I’m not the only one, connecting to these emotions. Thank you whole heartedly for your lovely words. They mean a lot to me ๐ โค๏ธ โจ
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