The anatomy of my soul is smoked in ashes with bold & if I try to extract the pure essence, then my whole will only hold the unwanted dark holes
You see the highs & the lows are the waves that splash & roar in rows in search of the very unknown in an open space that’s yet to be explored
So I keep healing my inner sores that are still bleeding the very core to steel breathing my mystical form so I steep soaring in the infinity zone
I am the free flow that see through my deep soul & then I tiptoe in my being mode to free me from my beast mode to seek peace & bring the sweet hope
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Wow Navin, this is so so beautiful!!! That third stanza is just breathtaking!!!! I absolutely love it! And the spoken word adds such power and life to the piece!!! Incredibly done, my dear friend!!! Your poetry is truly fantastic 🖤🤗🤍
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Ace, you’re very kind….I’m glad you liked my poem & spoken word…such uplifting words….thank you very much….much love ✨ 🤗💫
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The third stanza is my favourite!! Incredible poem!
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Thanks dear!! I’m glad you liked my poem…
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So very powerful and empowering Navin. Hearing the spoken word is wonderful as well. 👏👏👏
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Thank you very much, Secrets…you’re always there to support ✨😊
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This is really beautiful, extra credits to your voice. 👏👏👏👏 I am not copying… But the last few lines is beyond beautiful and I love the way , how it ends with hope!!! ❣️❣️
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Thank you very much kind Preeths….Im glad you liked my voice as well….haha, no you didn’t copy me 🤗❤️
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oohhh man!! Absolutely love this powerful, powerful poem. And hearing you read it just increased it for me. Goodness gracious.
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Thank you Tara….I very much appreciate your lovely words…..I’m glad you liked my voice 😊✨
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I sure do.
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Love the line, “keep healing my inner sores”! Relatable and beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you very much, Linda….you’re always so supportive ✨
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🙂 ✨
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This is so wonderful and deep Navin. May we all find the peace we seek.
I’ve always been fascinated by how poets recite their poems and this word poetry is admirable. 👌👌Stay safe….Keep writing!!!
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Oh wow, thank you for your wonderful words….I’m glad you liked my poem & spoken word….Stay safe as well….and stay blessed 💫
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Gorgeous lines. Whenever I see the word sore in a poem it makes me cringe but also relate
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Thanks EC for liking my poem….I know the “cringe” feeling….I love when you spread your wings & shine your fine lines ✨💫
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I think we both appreciate others poeting ❤️
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You’re absolutely right ❤️✨
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👏👏👏 So amazing and heartfelt!
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Thank you Rishika 😊✨
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beautiful one
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Thank you….
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Absolutely gorgeous.
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Thank you Gabriela ✨
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My pleasure 🥰🌹
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I loved this piece. Very powerful and breathtaking… Sometimes adding voice makes all the difference ❤️🤗🙏💫👏
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Thank you very much, dear Diana….I appreciate your wonderful support in every manner ❤️🙏😊
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so much power in your words written and spoken dear Navin!
Life is not an easy ride as we go with the flow with ups and downs. Well delivered❣️
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Thank you for your kind & heartfelt words, dear Cindy…..I’m glad you liked my poem & spoken word….true, life is full of the highs n the lows….the key is to keep the balance n flow….to keep rising when we fall ✨❤️
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You’re soooo welcome Navin!!! It was awesome and you are so right about that …. we fall and rise again! Damn, and I wanted life to be a straight line to the top!!! hahahahahah 💖🤗🤣 Keep inspiring❣️
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You’re very sweet & kind….keep shining 💖✨….pls do let me know if you wish to participate in Astha’s Utmost Feelings anthology….around 5 slots are left now….only if you wish to…there’s no obligation whatsoever 🙏
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I Would love to Navin.
Can you give me details again?
Thank you so much for making this happen. xoxoxoxoxo My heart is willing.. and time is always scarce. Can it be about her?💖💖❣️❣️❣️💗💗🙏
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I’ve just sent you a mail through your contact page….Please read & reply me back….the theme is love….so yeah, you can submit a poem about her….information with link & instructions will follow once I’ve received your reply….Thank you very much 🙏 ❤️ ✨ 🤗 💫
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Oh great, I’ll check.. I’m better here than there 🤣💗🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 Thanks sooo much I appreciate you following up. 💖💗🙏
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Hey Cindy, let me know when you’ve checked your mail…thank you very much 🙏 ✨ ❤️
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I checked and didn’t see anything except your message. I’ll look again. Didn’t sleep much last night and vaccine today…. so far so good just tye tye. I’ll go and see 🙏
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I hope things will go fine with vaccination….pls take care, Cindy….you can send me the poem for anthology (theme = love) with your full name & cell number….such that you can be added to the whatsapp anthology grp….the rest I’ll take care….sleep well ❤️🙏
my email: Navin.manik@gmail.com
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Absolutely sublime…
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Thank you….
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It’s a true pleasure
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Woww! It’s really fabulous
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Thank you very much!
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Most welcome
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