Lightning Rhymes

Lightning Rhymes

Original poetry, Poems about anger, Poems about anxiety, Poems about disease

Living in thoughts could be comfortable
Embracing the present seems unacceptable
Reality can be so unbelievable
Painbody is snapping me to unusual
Loving edges of perfect imperfections
Healing the soul is sole intention

Deep scars on my brutal blood surface
Arrows piercing in my broken top shelf
Bleeding river from my sensitive vessels
Crying ocean when I’m feeling restless
Feeling crazy when I skip the deep breaths
Unleashing devil when I’m manic anxious

Extinguishing sparks to calm the burning ashes
Expressing emotions to hit the freaking reset
Grinding patterns to feel the pure sand
Writing lines with my wondered senses
Lightning rhymes with my thunder pencil
Riding waves in search of peace & balance

—– Lightning Rhymes —–

Lightning Rhymes is a poem about the struggle to free myself from the sticky web of patterns & emotions. Sometimes I succeed & sometimes, I simply don’t. I’m learning every single moment to “deal” with me in order to find the inner peace. When the snapping snaps; when I loose my balance (psychological as well as physical), the whole ground shakes. It’s just not myself, who get affected.

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Please check these poems as well: Conjurer by PoeEternal (1), Parentheses and blinding light by Choices (2), My Hissssing Eye (3)

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73 thoughts on “Lightning Rhymes”

  3. In these troubled time your words are quietly resonating, and you’ve captured me with theses 2 lines….
    ‘Crying ocean when I’m feeling restless
    Feeling crazy when I skip the deep breaths”

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  10. The power of your passions… the power of your words .. everything is incredible! The talent and the force that emanates from you… I am in love with this poem!

    “Deep scars on my brutal blood surface
    Arrows piercing in my broken top shelf
    Bleeding river from my sensitive vessels
    Crying ocean when I’m feeling restless”

    xoxoxo…

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    1. Dearest Gabriela, what a beautiful and heartfelt comment from you. Thank you very much. I’m glad you could connect with this poem. Sending you love and hugs💖✨

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  11. Deep expressions of physical reaction on emotional level…..love these lines…. Loving edges of perfect imperfections
    Healing the soul is sole intention. 🙏🏼💙🦋

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    1. Thanks Monica for your advice….much appreciated….thinking thoughts in itself could be over thinking sometimes….being mindful most of the day leads me to peace….though I do have the moments of imbalance, where my peace shreds into pieces….just like any other human being….especially after the bleeding in the brain….though I’m seriously trying to “incorporate” a few moments to meditate….that trying needs to be changed to doing….I know ✨

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  14. Navin, this is stunning!! You are such a word wizard! Poetry seems to flow out of your soul so effortlessly ✨ I loved the “bleeding river…. crying ocean…” lines ♥️ and the ending, “Riding waves in search of peace & balance,” wraps everything together exquisitely. Bravo!

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  15. Your words resonant and send ripples of thought. It is definitely deep and your vocabulary is clearly on point. The perfect choice of words to the topic. ✌👌👌

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  26. “Lightning rhymes with my thunder pencil
    Riding waves in search of peace & balance” ✨✨

    Wow! I guess I should be back on WP (I’ve been very inactive XD) only to read these terrific lines!

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    1. Thank you wholeheartedly for such a lovely comment, Sonia. That means a lot.

      Yeah, I did notice that you’ve been away for quite a while….I checked your blog for new posts a couple of times….Hoping you’ll get some time to write your deep rhymes 😊✨

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    1. It feels “great” that I’m not the only one, connecting to these emotions. Thank you whole heartedly for your lovely words. They mean a lot to me 🙏 ❤️ ✨

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