You’re wearing this bloody sensual body suit
Your seductive eyes are big & beautiful ocean blue
Every step you take is calculated & very shrewd
You’re holding me tight in your tender arms of unbreakable loop
You’re dragging me out of my castle of haunted moods
My face is hidden under the layer of my shady & torn hood
You unhide my crown of thorns with fire of your intense look
Those piercing thorns in my head are painful but I’m keeping calm & my cool
A single kiss from the sensual & poisonous lips of yours
Makes me bleed red diamonds, while I bloom into the scene so blue
The scars on my face look scary in this surreal reality so brute
I can feel I’ll soon be running on fumes & will for sure be doomed
I spin 360 degrees to see the swirling point of view
Your bite will slowly dissolve my flesh & bones before I forever snooze
This cruel nature of yours is so seductive & very crude
This whole picture is so dark while I’m hanging on this edgy hook
This very moment I dig my ground deeper to find my roots
I only see those huge shadows in the shade of gloom
I don’t need to speak loud or write down to show you the proof
Everytime I come closer, you disappear in air with a single poof
I’m searching myself desperately inside of you
Ecstatic rush in my blood when I taste the poison in you
I’m so much in love with this poison & poisonous you
I’m flying high in my smoking to be forever with you
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I liked the rhythm
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Thank you very much.
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Damn!!! So beautiful! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks dear Shreya….I’m glad you liked it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘
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Damn Navin!!!!! Haunting and sensual!!! Love it!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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I’m so glad to know that Hal!!!!! Thank you ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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You’re so welcome! ❤️
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I love this piece Navin! You’re so great! 💛
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Thank you very much for your lovely comment.
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My pleasure reading Navin. Take care! 💛
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Thanks & you too 💙
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Romantic and beautiful. 😍
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Thanks Kritika 😊💙
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Flows sensually slow, rhythmically like an ocean tide. 💙🦋
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What a beautiful comment….thanks Blue 🙏 💙
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You’re welcome 🙏🏼🙂🦋
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I am dying. This poem is breathtaking. I don’t know what line to pick. I don’t know what metaphor to point out to. My heard is spinning. Absolutely gorgeous.
Much love to you Navin.
xoxo
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Thank you very much dear Gabriela for the beautiful words, right from your heart. They mean a lot to me 🙏 ❤️. Much love dear G!
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Navin, this poem is like a supernova filled with passion.
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My heart melts down with your Gorgeous words dear G ❤️
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Navin that passion of yours melted me. Take care my friend ❤️
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🙏❤️
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This is erotically beautiful. Entwined with forbidden romantic innuendos👏
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I’m glad you liked it dear Keza 🙏
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Yes I really did 💜
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🙏💙
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Loved the rhythm with some very strong words and thoughts!
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Thank you kindly for your lovely comment Piyush!
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Never thought that poison and love could be expressed in this way. Impressive 😍
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I’m glad you liked my poem. I really appreciate it 💙
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The sensuous words forming sensuous imagery in the eyes. This is a fabulous piece of art and beauty. The carving is mesmerising.
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Wow…what a great comment…I’m happy to know you liked my poem. Your comment was hiding in the spam folder…idk y…but better late than never 😉
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Word effect 😉.
Yes better late than never. 👍😊
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😊
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It’s absolutely Fabulous.
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I’m delighted you like this poem. Thank you.
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Omg…. This is so beautiful❤😍…. Just got me speechless😑
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Thank you very much Komal ❤️✨
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Romantic, evocative, and very creative. Loved it!
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Thanks a lot for your beautiful comment, dear Katy ❤️
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Makes me bleed red diamonds…now that is something I’d like to cause…this drew my mind to excitement and my skin to crave it’s evolution…
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“this drew my mind to excitement and my skin to crave it’s evolution”….loving your lines…the beautiful you & the beauty in you
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I can feel this poem so intently. The rawness we feel, the exposure to all our small abnormalities or insecurities, all laid out for the person to see, when we are newly in awe or in love with someone.
“A single kiss from the sensual & poisonous lips of yours
Makes me bleed red diamonds, while I bloom into the scene so blue
The scars on my face look scary in this surreal reality so brute
I can feel I’ll soon be running on fumes & will for sure be doomed”
The fear of loss, so intensely expressed. Your writing is lovely visceral, and raw! Blessing and love to you my dear friend, Navin. Hugs and smiles coming your way via tear drops where angels fly. Joni
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Dear Joni, how lovely words….thank you kindly….this poem is pure rawness….feeling the feelings as they are….love, passion, insecurities, pain & more….but still in Iove with the poisonous….I’m flying high on the beautiful blanket of your heartfelt words ✨❤️🙏
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