I can hear the silence
Silence is violent
Violence is fighting
This fight is painful
Pain is so hungry
Hunger is craving
This craving is crazy
Crazy are emotions
Emotion is a feeling
Feeling is deluded
Delusions are exploding
Explosions are hurting
Hurt is not worthy
Worth is so dirty
Dirt is though earthly
Earth is the grounding
Grounded in deep gravity
Gravity is levitating
Levitate the outer space
Space is full of circles
Circle of tiny dots
Dots are the elements
Elements are flowing
The flow of pure smoke
Smoke is formless
Forming the eternal soul
Soul is the purest beat
Beating of heart
Heart is breathing
Breath of inner peace
Peace is to love
Loving to live
Living to keep dying
Dying to relive from the deep
—– Smoking Soul —–
Smoking Soul is a poem about how I sometimes can hear the silence. Sometimes silence is violent, which triggers the chain reaction of emotions & observations. How it takes me to different phases and how it guides me to reconnect to the pure energy in the end – the beautiful / smoking soul. I am sure, it is not just relevant to me but to many others.
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Please check these poems as well: Darkness – the intense light (1), Not A Trophy by Spirited Soul (2), This Animal is Back(3)
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What to say on this poem of yours Navin, just beautiful, each line so so wonderfully done
Great job!
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You’ve said it all….thanks, Era!
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You’re most welcome!
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😊🙏
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So beautiful!
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Thanks Vaishnavi ✨
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I love the way you have written this. Always creative, meaningful and beautiful work from you, Navin.
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Thank you kindly for your so beautiful words, Katy. You’re always there with your support & uplifting voice ❤️✨🙏
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I admire how you have used every emotion and the way you ended on love. A great take. A clever and unique perspective every human faces at particular phases of life pinned down in this poem. Great job my friend. Keep up the good work
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Thank you very much for your beautiful comment, Raghavasree….that’s exactly what I’m showing through this poetry ✨
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The pleasure is all mine. Happy to see I found the essence of it. Good day 🙂🌸
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You surely did. Also have a good evening to you 😊
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🙂🌸
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Beautiful!!! Love the pattern to it and the way it just all flows together!!! Hard hitting words. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks you all the way….for your beautiful words, Hal!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️✨
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Anytime! 😉
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❤️🤗
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This is amazing!!!
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Thank you, Aashi!!
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This is so fantastic!!
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Thanks Harsh!!
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Waooo ♥️♥️♥️
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Thank you ❤️❤️❤️
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I am so sorry I wasn’t here sooner. Will you forgive me?
From silence, to dying, to living, to closing the circle… the non ending rotation of a carousel.. birth, hate, love, death.. and silently we start over… and only YOU can describe everything like this.. only YOU..
I would like to say: Stop spiraling… I don’t want to come back… and yet I will be back because I need to read your poetry and everything starts again.. birth, love, hate, death, silence,
Fabulous work.
You have my heart, Navin.
xoxo
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Would I ever be mad at you that I need to forgive you? Never. You must write whenever it suits you, dearest Gabriela.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind words. You’ve got the essence of my poem….”the non ending rotation of carousel”
I’ll be more than happy if you come back to read my poetry while I’m spiraling like the wind.
Have a lovely weekend with inner peace.
Much love ❤️🤗✨🍫🌹
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Thank you Navin. I truly love this poem. But then I love all your poems. Have a beautiful weekend my dearest friend.
Much love to you.
G.
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You’re too kind, dearest G ❤️✨
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I’m honest 🙂
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❤️🙏
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❤️❤️❤️
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To be honest, I had never read a poem of this kind!
This is so unique and so powerful.Each line had its own uniqueness and I loved this piece. Probably the best poem in your blog.
Great job, Navin!❤️
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Oh wow….thank you very much, Hemalatha! What a wonderful words from you. I’m glad you could feel my words ❤️🙏
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My pleasure, Navin!😊
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Really amazing poem!
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Thank you very much, Pooja!
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You’re welcome!
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Woow!!!
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Thank you!!!
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Nice one Navin. i feel like I’m falling through your mind when I read it!
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Wow…thank you kindly, Jay Bleu. I’ll take it as a positive compliment coz my mind is….🤣
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hahaha
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Overflowing with emotions…
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Thanks Piyush….yeah emotions & the circle of realization
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Wonderful words🤗. I enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you kindly, Olivia ✨🤗
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Beautifully written. Absolutely love this.💛
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Thanks a lot, Arati. ✨❤️
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This is so deep. Everything is connected! I love the way you’ve expressed ‘silence’ ✨✨
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Thank you very much for your wonderful words, Sonia! ✨❤️
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Wow this is deep and powerful! An amazing write 😀
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Thank you very much for your kind words! ✨😊
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Interesting read!
loved the way you used the last word in each sentence as a new one for the next! Impressive…
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I’m glad you found my poem interesting. Thanks, Rinum ✨
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You write very well you have portrayed the struggle the torment the turmoil so vividly . You conclude on a positive tone of positivism and hope which takes it to a different level .
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Thank you very much for your beautiful words, Veena. I’m glad you liked my poem & could “feel” the essence.
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Fabulous write. The way you connected the words is amazing.
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Thanks a lot Kritika….this poem is special to me….but then which one is not 😊
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Excellent choice of words… This poem is like an intense river that flows through you, and describes perfectly the many colors of silence. Beautiful work ❤
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That’s exactly i was experiencing…the river was simply flowing…thank you very much for your kind & beautiful words ❤️✨
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impeccable👌🏻
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Thank you ✨
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This is just BEAUTIFUL ❤️…. Crafted in an amazing way, each word, each line, each emotion is perfectly expressed and wonderfully written. I can feel it inside my soul. It flowed so well with a unique special pattern. Such a fantastic heartfelt emotional honest piece. Really loved it. Truly great work, you are gifted ❤️
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Oh wow….I’m delighted to know that you could feel it inside your soul….this is the biggest compliment ever….I’m speechless….thank you very much for your beautiful words….I’m deeply touched ❤️
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Awww you are so so so welcome…. It’s truly beautiful ❤️
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Thank you whole heartedly 😊🙏❤️🤗
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