Wilting under the tilted splinters
Blinking to see flickering clickers
Playing with my sneaky demons
Voicing my cadence with slippery fingers
Creating this path in deadly trackers
Breaking the norms in small fragments
Braking with claws on warm ashes
Picturing the forms with my naked senses
Scanning the heart in pure silence
Spiraling the sky with mindful timings
Spotting the clouds with sharp lightning
Sounding the dark with beautiful thundering
Shining in my eyes when I glimpse a mirror
Signing these lines to refine the present
Sighing this rhyme when I sea the wisdom
Resighting this site to build my serene kingdom
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Oh I love the crescendo in your poem Navin traveling through space and time and pure emotion. So wonderfully expressed! πππππ
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I’m delighted to read your lovely words, dear Cindy…crescendo it is…thank you very much πβ¨β€οΈπ«πΊ
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Sooo happy to hear dear Navin.. you’re most welcome!!πππ
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Wow. This was awesome, Navin . Such a wonderful and unique flow, I was hooked with the first line. Brilliant, my friend.πβ€οΈπ
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Thank you very much for your beautiful words, my friend Grace…I’m honoured that such wonderful comment comes from you, who masters the flowβ¨β€οΈπ«
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That’s so nice of you to say, Navin. You are so welcome.π
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Great photo! ^^;
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I’m glad you liked the photo…I took it during one of my walks to the magical woods nearby β¨
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Fantastic, Navin!
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David
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Thank you very much, my dear poet friend David β¨β€οΈπ«
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Simply beautiful Navin β€οΈβ€οΈ
Loved the flow of this poem and the gorgeous end.
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I’m glad that you loved the flow & the end…thank you very much, dear Preeths β€οΈβ¨β€οΈ
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Fantastic poem! I really loved every bit of it π
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I’m truly honoured…thank you very much Quaranjavirus π«πβ¨
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Its Veera π
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Thank you Veera π
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What a wonderful poem my dearest Navin. You are absolutely great!
Sending plenty of hugs to you.
xoxo
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Thank you very much for your wonderful & lovely words, my dearest Gabriela…I’m honoured & deeply touched β¨ππ«π
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My pleasure Navin. Please know that I treasure your writings and your friendship.
xoxo
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I’m echoing your words here, dearest Gabriela…coz I treasure your writings & your friendship as well β¨ππ«
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This is some brilliant poetry, the rhythm really captures my attention, keeps me reading with beats of your wisdom and creativity. It takes me on this exquisite journey from the earth, the sky, the trees to the landscape within, and I take the ride joyfully. Breaking the norms in small fragments – speaks to me very clearly. If I try to pick more lines I would end up highlighting each and every line, and yet also the last stanza could be my very favorite. I wish I could write a better appreciation for this masterful piece.
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I’m sitting in train & reading your beyond beautiful words…your reflection on my poetry…I’m in awe in this very moment…I’m smiling & my eyes are shining…you wish you could write a better appreciation?…you’re very humble, Pragalbha…you’ve truly captured the essence…the landscape within…I can’t express my gratitude enough for your wisdom…I’m honoured β¨ππ«π
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Oh that makes me happy deeply that I could convey how beautifully your poem touched me :)) It is so my pleasure and privilege to engage.
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