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I can clearly recall the night when this poem came to me. The sleepless night & restlessness in me with those memories turned into this poem and my night into morning. Creating spoken word of ‘The Mourn Sky’ is another baby-step forward towards letting go & to see a glimpse of love in pain ✨❤️💫
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Wow Navin this is powerful my friend.
Love the title.
Loved the poem.
Keep shining my friend 🌟🙏💕
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Thank you very much, dear Maggie…I’m glad you liked my spoken word 🙏✨💜💫
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Always my pleasure Navin.🙏
Peace and many blessings to you and yours this festive season 🌲💕🤗🧑🎄
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Thank you very much, dear friend 🙏✨💜💫
Peace, blessings and love to you & yours ✨🌲🌟💫🎅⛄️🤗
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Thank you Navin 🧑🎄🌲💖🤗
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A beautiful poem, wonderfully narrated Navin …
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Thank you very much, Ivor 🙏✨💜💫
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powerful, yes❤️deeply touching your truth, for which i thank you sincerely🙏🏼❤️🌹🪷🌺❤️🙏🏼
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My apologies for the late reply…I just found out that you had written such wonderful words…Thank you very much for them…I’m honoured 🙏✨❤️💫❤️
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💙✨ have you posted this on WordPress before? It sounds familiar, I could be wrong. Wishing you a Joyful Holiday Season, Navin dear. 😊
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I did post the poem in my previous post…this time it’s the spoken word version…so perhaps, that’s why…thank you very much for your lovely wishes…you too have a Joyful & Magical Holiday Season, Blue ✨💙💫🙏
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Thank you! 🙂💙
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Absolutely beautiful , Navin 💕
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Thank you very much, dear Grace 🙏✨💜💫
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Truly my pleasure 💕
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Wow, Navin. That is just… so good. I love it.
❤
David
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My gratitude to you, dear David 🙏✨❤️💫
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Incredible spoken word, Navin.. powerful and so deep and introspective. Awesome rhyming poem and timely.❣️
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Delighted to read that you liked my recitation of this poem…thank you very much for your lovely words, Cindy 🙏✨💜💫
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You’re so very welcome , Navin💕❤️😘wonderfully inspiring ❤️
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We all bleed. We all feel pain. We all sigh, in hope and in despair.
Thank you for sharing this deeply emotional piece of your journey. I strongly relate to being awake and wrestling with different things in my mind, and then discovering it is the morning, time to ‘go again’ into the new day, so to speak.
I really liked the echo you’ve put in different lines which helped emphasise the impact they had at different points in your spoken word. 🙏
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Wow, I love your words…I do know the feeling of “time to ‘go again’ into the new day”…beautifully put…thank you very much for connecting with this piece of mine…I’m deeply touched & truly honoured, dear Hamish 🙏✨💜💫
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I am glad to read and listen to your created art, so keep on creating and I’ll keep reading!
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Thank you very much, dear Hamish…it’s so kind of you to say 🙏✨💜💫
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