Tear my eyes to ocean Tear my body into pieces Break open the dark skies Break me into phases Paint my face in thick red Paint my phrase to crazy Pain me till I feel the edges Pain me to find the inner space Falling from top of the hill Falling to reach my grounding Diving to kill the killzone Diving to meet the unknown Dying to repair the top shelf Dying to reborn my whole self
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Just the other day, I visited Amazon (not the rainforest) when I found out that I’ve received a new review of my debut book – Lightning Rhymes…An amazing surprise I must say…
So here I am once again sharing my joy with you all…I’m simply delighted & honoured by reading this wonderful review by Shana A…You can find her on Instagram – @lesbian.erotic.poetry…My gratitude to you, dear Shana 🙏✨💟💫💟
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Lightning Rhymes isn’t just a collection of my poetry…it is my journey that I share…my meetings with the known & the unknown…writing poetry is therapeutic at the same time…
I’m grateful to each & every one of you…that you read my poetry on WordPress & Instagram…it means a lot to me…you know my book would just be a rectangular block or a digital file without your love & wonderful support…I can’t describe the feelings when I see & read that my book is bought, read & then reviewed…it’s a blessing…
I would only humbly ask you to buy my book if you connect with my rhymes…Lightning Rhymes 🙏✨💟 💫
At times I am the bloody riot when my patterns act as a set of sharp plier that explicitly cut the delicate red wire to defuse the useless & quaky quarrel but then everything goes simply haywire and turn into the blues filled with pointy blames of hey & whys when the quiet in me detonates to the disturbed violent which isn’t the same as the conscious choice of pure violet
I can then see the greys in my big brown eyes which is obviously the craze dancing as the burning flames so wild that I start to phrase this scene as my twisted rhyme to simply brush away the pain dipped in colours so intense & loud to simply fall in place at this point in time
But when I sense all this on my screen with my closed eyes then I can tell these are just the shades of my beautiful life where I’m subconsciously digging the grave of my bleeding mind which is caged in the limitless space of the magical open skies coz everything feels so strange to my hidden but very present wise as if I were the rage beasting with my untamed deep voice but I’m just trying to breathe the inner peace in this electric current vibe so I shift the speed to reconnect with the energy of The High
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Tonight I’m at this place Where black is the shade White is the sense Space is the scene Energy is intense Everything is rain Salt in the air Burning this skin Everything seems pain But love is the taste Memory is the lane Silence is the music Crystal on my lips Whispering the name Eyes are searching Green in the sea My state is in pieces While I remain at peace
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You’ve left behind a permanent mark in my whole I know it’ll always remain smoking sacred & pure I hope you can see the light in your crystal clear core
You’re more than A-mirror, a magical reflection of the highest source You’re the breathtaking sparkling waterfall that freely flows You’re the crystal green, the beautiful light that intensely glows
You see, this body suit is just an appearance, a closed piece of cloth And love is much more bigger than the feeling of “mi amor” This life is the meditative voyage on waves of the highs & the lows
The only way you would know that my body is ashes in the human form Is when I’ll disappear from the pages just like the mysterious black hole No footprints of mine you’ll ever find, coz I’m the fine sand on the shore
I’m understanding the meaning of pure touch that I once craved for My gratitude to you for being with me from the other side of this globe The Universe is echoing “It’s You”, just say no more beautiful soul
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Nadia is a poet, a storyteller, a spoken word artist & a digital creator on Instagram…but most importantly, she’s a beautiful soul…check out @heartofnadia on Instagram…it’s just not her IG handle…her writings come directly from her heart…please do follow her page if you connect with her writings…
This amazing reel is created by Nadia (@heartofnadia)
Here’s the full review:
I am delighted to share this incredible poetry book “Lightning Rhymes” by the very talented writer Navin Manik @navinspoetry_
Reading through the pages I felt like I was being given a glimpse into the writer’s soul. Navin has a way of expressing his innermost feelings through his rhythmic poetry.
I have recited a small verse from the poem titled “Lightning Rhymes”.
Thank you Navin for sharing your talent with the world.
Check out his page @navinspoetry_
Support Indie and self published poets, writers, authors, artists in any and every way you can.
Life is dull without Art.
Much Love Always ❤️ Nadia
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The Moment (a poem):
So here I am once again to share with you my joy The moment I watched this reel, I was like “Oh my” The moment I listened to this dreamy & peaceful voice The moment I eyed these wonderfully written lines It was a heart touching moment & truly a great surprise My eyes then started to simply glow & drip the very shine The moment of bliss where my heart did purely smile You see, blessings come in several different forms & kinds The free flow of energy in this magical deep blue sky My gratitude to Nadia for reviewing Lightning Rhymes
I’m grateful to each & every one of you…for your wonderful support…for your unconditional love towards my poetry…I would only humbly ask you to buy my book if you connect with my rhymes…Lightning Rhymes…
Don’t walk like this in your silky skin infront of me Incredible My craving for you is crawling up a mountain frenzy Irresistible You’re looking red hot & my eyes are burning destiny Inflammable
Gaining your trust while I throw you with my rawness on that turf Animal Messing with your mind & body while I pull your messy hair Animal Tearing your peace in pieces while I look deep into your big eyes Animal
Whispering my twisted words in your ears to reach your red crystal Sensitive Sketching on you with my sharp nails to make you whisper pain with your deep vocals Sensual Shaking you intensely to awaken your senses to make a connection with your crying soul Spectacle
Biting your tender flesh slowly to calm my hunger with my hungry teeth Oh, I feel like an animal My lips are sticky & shaded as I taste the thick red that you’re bleeding I think, I’m an animal Even the wind under dark heavens of hell is howling crazy Yeah, I’m an animal
I see you in my mirror & my lens is bleeding red visuals Ahh, I’m so bloodthirsty animal I see you in my shadow & I look like that fiery dragon Wo, I’m so scary animal I see you shattered & scattered all over my dark ground Rahh, I’m so brutal animal I disappear in darkness after killing your dying soul to be one with the new you & eternity Yeah, I am that tainted & untamed animal
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I’m deeply touched, delighted & honoured by reading this wonderful review by Karima, of Digital Rabbit Hole of my debut book – Lightning Rhymes…My utmost gratitude to Karima for reading my book & writing this amazing review on Amazon…I’m sharing it with you all…it’s my way of sharing the joy…You can also find Karima on YouTube
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Here’s the full review:
“Navin reveals himself to the reader, through at times, visceral, sensual, and enlightened verse. He’s a romantic, a self aware demon, a passionate poet, who lives his lines and takes you along with him. His rhyme scheme, rhythms and content, captivate the reader from the start. I enjoyed the juxtaposition of his table of contents..The almost school-boy romantic in love with eyes, curves and depth..and then the man who struggles, against insomnia and his own nightmares that live inside…even in bright daylight. The book is fascinating on all these levels and it’s honest, almost innocent at times and raw.
In Navin’s own words: “My poetry is the flow in me & it’s the soul I simply set free”
His flow is a raging river with quiet pools and always clear depths. I recommend ” Lightning Rhymes” to anyone who gets excited about poetry. I promise you, this book will do that to you… and it will make you ponder.”
I’m truly grateful to each & every one of you…for your wonderful support…for your unconditional love towards my poetry..I would only humbly ask you to buy my book if you connect with my rhymes…Lightning Rhymes…
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